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August 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I love this story. Very very well done. You have a way with words, I must give you that. You make the characters come alive, the story feel real. It is a rare talent. Bravo.
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October 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
One of the best works of fanfiction I have ever read.
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January 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Stunning. I loved every second of that!
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December 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Okay, I'm actually gonna rewiev this story. I never rewiev storyes on adultfanfiction.net, but... Write more! More to the story, more other storyes with Mana/Gack yaoi, take your pick. I want more Mana/Gackt storyes! And you're damn good at writing them!
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June 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Tres bien! Merveilles! Kawaii!!! Oh my gosh, you made consuming cherries erectile! I really, really liked this fic! It was suteki...
*a friend of the person who just reviewed (^)*:
Visual effects just got a new meaning there, mes ami!
Magnific
you know, a lot of slash artists do not have the guts to implicate such meaningful fiction stories as yours does. J'aime le livre de gacktxmana!! Oui, Oui! moi aussi mes ami!
wonderful!!! keep up the great job. Je beaucoup le tu petit fictionairre!
Au Revoir, Ja Ne!~
*a friend of the person who just reviewed (^)*:
Visual effects just got a new meaning there, mes ami!
Magnific
you know, a lot of slash artists do not have the guts to implicate such meaningful fiction stories as yours does. J'aime le livre de gacktxmana!! Oui, Oui! moi aussi mes ami!
wonderful!!! keep up the great job. Je beaucoup le tu petit fictionairre!
Au Revoir, Ja Ne!~
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April 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
J.M? Slang for Just Mushy? :D
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March 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
J.M
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October 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wonderful, amg cag capations of Mana and Gackts relationship.
I will definantly been more than willing to read more from you.
Thank you,
Hitomi.
Ja ne
I will definantly been more than willing to read more from you.
Thank you,
Hitomi.
Ja ne
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May 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I don't usually read real-person slash. Something about it squicks me. But then I thought, 'What the hell, it's late and I'm bored.' I didn't expect this. By the time I got through the first few paragraphs my jaw had dropped, and it stayed that way throughout. It didn't matter who they were or what they did, just as long as -you- kept narrating it.
I should have seen this as flawed. It's stuffed full of sentence fragments-- that you made WORK. There isn't a thing you could change to make it better. I'm a psycho grammar-nazi most of the time, so that means a lot. ^_^
You've really reminded me of what I've been forgetting in my own writing. Now I'm crazy-inspired. I'm going to go try to write now, and hopefully not completely rip you off.
You're amazing.
-- Currie
I should have seen this as flawed. It's stuffed full of sentence fragments-- that you made WORK. There isn't a thing you could change to make it better. I'm a psycho grammar-nazi most of the time, so that means a lot. ^_^
You've really reminded me of what I've been forgetting in my own writing. Now I'm crazy-inspired. I'm going to go try to write now, and hopefully not completely rip you off.
You're amazing.
-- Currie
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May 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This was a great story!!
Arent those two hooooooooooooooooooot?
Love- The Kitten
Arent those two hooooooooooooooooooot?
Love- The Kitten