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April 17, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Good ending, realistic and bitter...
BRAVO from me for not throwing them into each other arms and making it a happy end.
BRAVO from me for not throwing them into each other arms and making it a happy end.
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April 15, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Oh wow *is semi-speechless* that...that...was so....AMAZING...i mean the building of tension and then....heart-rending, comprehensible and with a touch of hope.......WOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOWWWWWWWWW!
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April 14, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Thats the end?! Are you kidding?! Argh I wanna know what happens! evile evile! *sobs* im all hooked now! That was a great fic, so great in fact it deserves a sequel. hint hint, nudge nudge.
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April 14, 2003 at 12:00 AM
You know the ending of this story broke my heart.
But the story would have fallen apart with any other ending.
And you've left us with just a teeny glimmer of hope.
Which almost makes the pain bearable.
Poor Darren. Yet, Daniel bht iht it all on himself.
Excellent story.
I hope someday you can write a sequel, but it not, Simply brilliant.
But the story would have fallen apart with any other ending.
And you've left us with just a teeny glimmer of hope.
Which almost makes the pain bearable.
Poor Darren. Yet, Daniel bht iht it all on himself.
Excellent story.
I hope someday you can write a sequel, but it not, Simply brilliant.
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April 9, 2003 at 12:00 AM
NOW I can't wait for the next part !!!
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April 9, 2003 at 12:00 AM
So Daniel's feelings have finally galvanized. Now he's got to hope that Darren will listen to him.
Good chapter.
Good chapter.
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March 30, 2003 at 12:00 AM
*sigh* I adore this story! (even tho i've allready read this much on entwined to perfection but i'm in the mood to voice opinions today) ...dying to know what happens next
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March 30, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I was really waiting for this story to get updated! Thank you! It is interesting how they'll meet again (they will, right?;))
It is amazing story, I love it.
It is amazing story, I love it.
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March 29, 2003 at 12:00 AM
AHHH this is one of my can't-stop reading stories! I love how you describe the charcters' emotions, espcially Darren's. It's sooo real that it made my eyes teary lol
I hope you continue it soon.
XXX
LaMi@
I hope you continue it soon.
XXX
LaMi@
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March 28, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I felt so bad for Darren. His pain is so real. You are doing an amazing job with this story, Kat.
I love it.
I love it.