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for Starting at the Beginning

by Katma

person LindaG
schedule March 1, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I feel so bad for Darren. I just want to hug him. And Daniel. I'm torn between smacking him, and hugging him, too. Poor guy. But I lay most of the blame for this fiasco at his feet. And he's not even man enough to apologize for what happened.
Great story Kat. Just amazing.
person gardenrose
schedule February 26, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I just read the whole thing and I am really impressed, very good story !!!
Very touching, very "real", I loved it.
Please update soon, can't wait to read more.
person Tai
schedule February 12, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Eww...that so could have gone better. I almost want to cry. *-* Which is a slightly tramuatizing thing, becase I hate crying, but I really want to. I love this story so much but it's just so sad! I can't wait for , I , I must know how it all ends, good bad or otherwise. *Shakes head* So many things to work out. I love the element of realism this has, though I'm sure i've said it before and I really likd the way Darren pretty much vocalized everything we slash happy fans think. YOu must give us more soon though, I love it so.
person LindaG
schedule February 8, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Very excellent chapter, Kat. So terrible for Darren, but so probable. Loved it.
person Pomona
schedule February 5, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Need to say once more that this chapter is one of the best written things I've ever seen, so you should feel PROUD.

And hey, I'd love to archive... drop me a line if you're ever interested.
person cecxy!!!!!
schedule January 30, 2003 at 12:00 AM
man!! can you write or what!!
that was so intense!!!!! so passio!
s!
so THEM!!!!!!!!!
i wish they were in love in real life!!!!! *sight*
congratulations!!!!!!
please keep going!!!!
you made my night!!!!!!!!1 lol
love ya!
person LindaG
schedule January 26, 2003 at 12:00 AM
You write them very well. I can imgine this ally lly happing. I have a feeling being k ink in the same room is not a good thing, though. Guess we'll see, hey?
person Pomona
schedule January 25, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I. Want. More. Simple as that... your style of writing is what keeps me in this fandom and lured o ito it in the first place. :)


http://parallellives.tripod.com/moon
person Taiorami
schedule January 23, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Well, I thought it was brilliant to be perfectly honest. I like the element of realism, like it could all happen for real, and it's sweet and...dare I say, kind of cute, towards the end of the fifth chapter. Poor drunken boys. I can't wait for another chapter and hope to see it soon. WOnderful writting.

Tai
person cex
schedule January 16, 2003 at 12:00 AM
is there something gonna happen in the club between them?
oohh dont stop!
your perception of how things are "maybe" between them right now is not that !!
!!
:-)