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for You're in BIG Trouble

by ElizabethAshbury

person To the first person on top of me
schedule February 26, 2016 at 12:00 AM
Of course she fucking doesn't. This story was written 13 years ago, when Courtney was 23 and this story makes FSOG look like the Notebook, she's gonna be 36 soon and has HOPEFULLY matured enough to write a goddamn BDSM story. But, then agan, she's now married with two children. Can u imagine if her children read this? lol
person Karla Shomaker
schedule February 2, 2016 at 12:00 AM
You CLEARLY don't know enough about BDSM do you?
person ohsoveryhorny
schedule January 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hehe Im loved it...Im gonna go masterbate now :)
person TheForsakenFreak
schedule June 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
*sigh* Doesn't it make you just a little bit sad knowing that you're writing something you may just never have? By the way! You have inspired me once again! I know I'm a litle bit old, but for HALLOWEEN, I am going to be a rabid heavy metal fan! ^_^ A combination of all my favorite band members for clothing. I'll have a giant Parental advisory sign, leather pants *david draiman* Marilyn Manson contacts, long black hair with red streaks, *Joey and Corey from Slipknot* Face paint, *MM and Wes Borland FORMER of Limp Bizkit Why? Why did he have to leave?! WHY?!?!?!* Speakers attatched to a belt on my waist with a little cd player, *BLAST KORN!!!* and, last but not least, a paddle, with 'Beat it Uprigth' in big redtersters. *nods head* HELL YEAH!!! I hope I get to piss off some of the more anal retentive people in my neighborhood. By the waaaaaaay.....I hear that JD happens to like THREESOMES. When you gonna get someone else in there? Huh? Huh? *winkwink* *nudgenudge* *laughs* ^o~*

~::-The Forsaken Freak-::~

P.S No way is oen of THE best Korn songs ever. *GRIN* I LOVE THE CHORUS!!!! "So I came to far? To end up this way, Feeling like I'm God, feeling theres no way..." HELL YEAH!!!!
person DiRtyHiveR
schedule October 11, 2003 at 12:00 AM
omfg,that was fucking amazinG! damn.. your a kick-ass author.. ::smiles:: =D!
person JayGrrl
schedule October 8, 2003 at 12:00 AM
getting late, couldn't read it all, but it's wonderful as usual!