rate_review Reviews

Wow!
Creepy, but good! Yes Good! But you're right - nothing like that should ever happen to Jonathan...
Good story, but, but, but...
"I looked down and saw the halfn shn shape as the bottom of the..." - something's not right...

otherwise it was nice and easy to read!

OO NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!! NOT JONATHAN!!!! HE CAN'T BE KILLED!!!! *sniffle* Oh.....poor, poor Munky......v.v IS THERE A SEQUEL OR SOMETHING? OR ARE YOU JUST LEAVING IT TO THE SICK IMAGINATION OF PEOPLE WHO ACTUALLY READ KORN FANFICTION?! Anyway...DAMN!!!! What a shit load of good description! I for one, SUCK at writing romance and lemons aren't my best. But extremely gory depressing and GROSS shit is right up my fuckin alley! ^_~ Who ever said females were too feminine to do this shit? Ever heard of Anne Rice? THE VAMPIRE CHRONICLES?! Hell yeah! Coming soon! VAMPIRIC ONE SHOT INVOLVING JONATHAN DAVIS AND a Very seductive vampire. A FEMALE vampire. HELL YEAH!!!!! waaaaaaAHOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!!

~::-The Forsaken Freak-::~

HOLY FUCK...WHY?? Your writing style is awesome, actually conjured up a picture of what was happening in my head. Thisa ona one-shot? You sure? I know I've come across this late, just found this site recently, but I hope you go into it a little more. Damn...poor Jonathan...a bit sadistic with him, are we? O_O;

Holy shit! That's not right! I admit you have a very rare talent that makes the story come alive but still, HOLY SHIT! It aint right! Jon is awesome! Bloody now.... awe awesome! Well... As long as it's not Head (Brian), I guess. Holy shit!!!! I'm sorry. I'll be having nightmares. ^_^ ^_^\//. Keep up the.... good.... work..... I guess

O_o;;! holy shit, update, this is amazing. I love it.. I like your writing style also. hehe.