rate_review Reviews

Very, very nice. I liked it! Would have only been better by more desc. at the end. Aside from that... wonderful! I -loved- all the Irish characters...perfect!

Oh, one more thing. It's WAIST! :D

This was so great! I hope you continue it soon !!

By the way, it's spelled 'waist'. :)

Wow.... just wow

You know what I wish?

I wish...

I wish we would all write our Johnny Depp fantasies without bringing Vanessa and the kids into them in any way. It just seems so direspectful. It's not fair to her, or their relationship.
Would you consider editing them out? They are so not necessary!
Other than that- I really enjoyed the whole story, I loved your family portraits, and all the peripheral stuff- and a lovely sexy seduction.

I just read your whole story and it is...wow. Please updat soon!!

looks great so far!!

damn straight you better continue! Good grief, there is hardly any good J. Depp stories any more and this one is among the decent ones...please update!

This was so *cries* BEAUTIFUL!! I just love how you write! It's so realistic! I imagine that's exactly how things would be with Johnny Depp and another girl. Hey, your name's not Finn, is it? This didn't happen to you? I'd believe you if you told me, this story is so cool!! IT'S COLOR COOL!! AWESOME MAN! WRITE MORE AWESOME STORIES LIKE THIS!

the only temporarily insane, yet dearly departed,
Mister Maui Wowie

I just had to come back after reading Kemikal Ex's review. Umm....okay? Why would you even say anything so rude and untrue as that? If you're a girl, you're obviously mistaken about how men think. If you're a guy, then you either have some sexual addiction, or you're just God's cruel joke to mankind. What do you mean when you say that about men? Not all men are like that. Robert Frost was a man, and he was possibly the most poetic and creative human being to ever live. Some people actually DO stop and smell the roses every once and a while. Maybe you should try it. I don't think Johnny Depp's character slipped at all. I wish you had have elaborated on WHY exactly, you thought it slipped.

She didn't say Finn was perfect. If I recall correctly, Depp's character was attracted to her "imperfection". Maybe you should read back over the story. And, I've watched E! enough to know that celebrity's love to be out of the spotlight every once and a while. Something like this could actually happen; it's not impossible or that hard to believe either. Celebrity's aren't gods. They're people too. They make mistakes, and DO visit the real world once in a while.

I really can't understand why you didn't enjoy this story as I did. Usually actor fics make me feel uncomfortable, but this one didn't. It's such an awesome and touching story. It shall forever be one of my favorites!

Really leaving this time,

Mr. Wowie

P.S. Really.

I'm embarrassed to admit that I like this, but I really do. I would suggest that you put more spaces in your writing, but that might be the website messing things up, so I won't hold it against you.