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person Mike

schedule January 2, 2003 at 12:00 AM

*bounces* the martians have landed! (cough...sorry)

I LOVE IT I LOVE IT I LOVE IT ILOVE IT I LOVE IT I LOVE IT I LOVE IT! please if its tbc.....continue continue *offers chocolate*

person LindaG

schedule December 8, 2002 at 12:00 AM

This is a really good story so far. I saw a few grammatical errors, but a beta reader could help you with that.

Please continue this story. I'd very much like to read more.

person Ilze

schedule December 6, 2002 at 12:00 AM

Well... quite interesting for a first fanfiction :) Dialogues are witty, although whole plot of the story is pretty blurry and simple.

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