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March 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I like this story; short, but with a suprising ending. I would have given the last sentence a mysterious, devilish "fading" though, by using dots at the end ..................... <--- like this, but hey, maybe that's just me. ;)
And I noticed one minor spelling error. (has)
Hope I could be of some service. *blows kiss*
And I noticed one minor spelling error. (has)
Hope I could be of some service. *blows kiss*
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March 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Ugh! Somehow or another, my post didn't arrive fully....
"I like this story; short, but with a suprising ending. I would have given the last sentence a mysterious, devilish "fading" though, by using dots at the end ....................."
After that, I stated that using dots is perhaps just my personal "thing" and that I also had discovered a minor spelling error.
*blows kisses*
"I like this story; short, but with a suprising ending. I would have given the last sentence a mysterious, devilish "fading" though, by using dots at the end ....................."
After that, I stated that using dots is perhaps just my personal "thing" and that I also had discovered a minor spelling error.
*blows kisses*
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July 29, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Hey! I enjoyed this story, if only for the reason that there isnt anything like it on the net. Very unique, and nice twist ending. Im an american girl who got into rugby in the last year (and got out of it rather fast after playing wing forward with a bunch of guys and breaking my collar bone), and you can imagine that this noble sport is almost non-existent here, as most americans are content with pansy sports like baseball. You're story was refreshing...and a nice change of pace for this american!