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January 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Freaking amazing! Hot! ;)
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November 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You really should make another chapter to this!! I loved it. Soooooooooooo hot!!!
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September 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
FIRST off, I will say I AGREE with tha 22 reviewers. I ABSOLUTELY LUVED IT!!! ^_^
SECONDLY, This was your FIRST fic here. NUFF said.
And THIRDLY, I wonder if anyone else who read tha reviews noticed that ALL tha FLAMERS are ANONYMOUS. They never left a way for you to reach them (since they felt you could take flames, they could too). AIN'T THAT A BITCH! They want it to be known this wasn't liked, BUT, NOT BY WHO.
I was gettin tired of EVERY site I go to, PEOPLE flame ignorantly. DON'T read sumthin that has a warning that you Will take offense to. That's just COMMON SENSE. It's good to know that 23 of 28 has Common Sense.
Simply put, They were PUSSES (Lisa, Micha, Meirous, Sara and Takun) FOR tryin to make everyone else MISERABLE because are. If they REALLY didn't like it, they WOULDN'T have taken tha TIME to review. This is wut I say Rain, When you HAVE reviews,tha fic was LIKED. When there AIN'T reviews, THEN no one liked it.
You're right. You can't please everyone, why try?
KEEP up tha Great work.
~ December ^_~
SECONDLY, This was your FIRST fic here. NUFF said.
And THIRDLY, I wonder if anyone else who read tha reviews noticed that ALL tha FLAMERS are ANONYMOUS. They never left a way for you to reach them (since they felt you could take flames, they could too). AIN'T THAT A BITCH! They want it to be known this wasn't liked, BUT, NOT BY WHO.
I was gettin tired of EVERY site I go to, PEOPLE flame ignorantly. DON'T read sumthin that has a warning that you Will take offense to. That's just COMMON SENSE. It's good to know that 23 of 28 has Common Sense.
Simply put, They were PUSSES (Lisa, Micha, Meirous, Sara and Takun) FOR tryin to make everyone else MISERABLE because are. If they REALLY didn't like it, they WOULDN'T have taken tha TIME to review. This is wut I say Rain, When you HAVE reviews,tha fic was LIKED. When there AIN'T reviews, THEN no one liked it.
You're right. You can't please everyone, why try?
KEEP up tha Great work.
~ December ^_~
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July 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
my gosh!!! sum ppl here are very picky..... personally i loved it!! its great!! who cares if the grammar is bad?? honestly...??? i loved it write more!! ^_^
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May 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
.............................................................HORNY! I AM VERRRRRY HORNY NOW!!!!
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January 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMG...i cant fink straight, ohh god i luved the way u worte the story, its realli good i felt as tho i was that person, GOD Chesters hot!!!!
well...keep up i wanna see more stories like this!!
well...keep up i wanna see more stories like this!!
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November 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Dont even listen to that critisism you got, DONT!
YOU WRITE GOOD, really good, and I was in thrall after the first five sentances, kept me hooked and damn, you are very descriptive and it's something that works perfectly to your advantage. :)
Fuck, that turned me on, and it takes alot to turn me on from reading a story...
Think I'll read it like a million times more! You go write some more stuff like that! :)
(I LOVED the perspective that you get the reader into the story...brilliant.)
Huggz
YOU WRITE GOOD, really good, and I was in thrall after the first five sentances, kept me hooked and damn, you are very descriptive and it's something that works perfectly to your advantage. :)
Fuck, that turned me on, and it takes alot to turn me on from reading a story...
Think I'll read it like a million times more! You go write some more stuff like that! :)
(I LOVED the perspective that you get the reader into the story...brilliant.)
Huggz
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September 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wow. That was amazing.
you should write a next chapter. *shrugs* Just words of advice.
you should write a next chapter. *shrugs* Just words of advice.
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September 1, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I loved this story!!!( I read some of it when it was on Fadomination.net) To everyone who thought it sucked.... FUCK YOU!!!!! and I will be that blunt.The grammar was not even bad,it looks like its been fixed from what I can tell and I think this story is that best! I really hope that you keep this story up,regaurdless of the stupid flames that it had been getting....don't listen to them.This stories awesome in my book!
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June 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hallo! More Chappies! MORE ! MORE! MORE!!!!