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September 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
OH YAY!
That was my first thought when I saw that you were picking up this story again. Im srry that you were having hard times, I know how that is, but I'm REALLY excited to have this story back. I never thought id see a new chapter for it! Its amazing, and I cant wait to see where it's going!!
That was my first thought when I saw that you were picking up this story again. Im srry that you were having hard times, I know how that is, but I'm REALLY excited to have this story back. I never thought id see a new chapter for it! Its amazing, and I cant wait to see where it's going!!
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June 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oh cool story line ;) I hope you add more to it soon.
<3lex
<3lex
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April 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Darling, I was hooked the moment I read your introductory paragraph. The story-line is awesome, and the idea behind it is breathtaking. The moment you said a masculine female could impregnate a feminine male, I was all over it. I thought that particularly hillarious, at any rate.
I wonder what would make them feminine or masculine, because it wouldn't just be in the appearance, obviously. With the men, it could be the argument... the masculine is the one who tops, but then there are women... Hmm... You're brilliant if you can make me ponder something in a review, just so you know. *g*
Aww, well. Constructive criticism time. I wish you could bulk up the chapters a little more, but you are probably like me and you don't have the time to sit and writie fanfictions all day. Also, if you would hit enter twice when you go to the next paragraph it would be more aesthetically pleasing, and easier to read for us who don't want to get off of our asses to go get glasglasses. (Didn't mean to make like Dr. Suess, there. It happens naturally.)
Anyway, keep up the writing. It's a wonderful story.
~*GypsyQueen*~
I wonder what would make them feminine or masculine, because it wouldn't just be in the appearance, obviously. With the men, it could be the argument... the masculine is the one who tops, but then there are women... Hmm... You're brilliant if you can make me ponder something in a review, just so you know. *g*
Aww, well. Constructive criticism time. I wish you could bulk up the chapters a little more, but you are probably like me and you don't have the time to sit and writie fanfictions all day. Also, if you would hit enter twice when you go to the next paragraph it would be more aesthetically pleasing, and easier to read for us who don't want to get off of our asses to go get glasglasses. (Didn't mean to make like Dr. Suess, there. It happens naturally.)
Anyway, keep up the writing. It's a wonderful story.
~*GypsyQueen*~
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March 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
*claps*
Another wonderful chapter from a wonderful writer. *grins*
Another wonderful chapter from a wonderful writer. *grins*
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December 10, 2003 at 12:00 AM
very good chapter, could you please write more soon i wana know what happends really bad.
Love Tana
Love Tana
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December 6, 2003 at 12:00 AM
awh!
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August 7, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I am so sorry I haven't reviewed in SO long. Chapter 7 was very sweet. I loved it. I hope things don't go too badly for Darren when he ends up pregnant.
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August 7, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 8 - Aww.. Poor boys. I *hope* things are going to go well. This seems to forbode something bad, though.
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August 7, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Unfortunately, the treatment in chapter 9 doesn't surprise me. I hope you continue this soon, because someone needs to save Darren from that bastard.
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July 27, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I adore period pieces so I was greatly excited to read this. Hopefully your chapters will become longer but I really am enjoying it.