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for Arranged Melancholia

by Seductress

person Savage Rose
schedule January 11, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I still love the idea of this fic! But I want MORE!!! Pwwwweeeeezzzee?? The chapters need to be longer...its such a tease to only get to read tiny bits!
person LindaG
schedule January 10, 2003 at 12:00 AM
How terrible for Darren to have to be given to this terrible Jones family. I feel so sorry for him.
Hugh is going to be terrible to him, I'm sure.
Please write more soon.
person sara
schedule January 10, 2003 at 12:00 AM
great story! more chapters soon! and pleeease make them bigger!
uuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuhhh!!! is there any rape, in further chapters? Lol! jk, but I think it's somethin' Hugh would do... Daniel to the rescuuuue!! XD bjokas, sara!
luv yer sotry!
person Mike
schedule January 1, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I LOVE THIS STORY! :)
person LindaG
schedule December 25, 2002 at 12:00 AM
Well, this is different. I am interested to see where you go with it.
person LindaG
schedule December 25, 2002 at 12:00 AM
Well, I certainly feel bad for the Hayes child being saddled with Hugh. Please continue soon.
person Tana
schedule December 25, 2002 at 12:00 AM
Hey you really explained our slash very well in your disclaimer. I could not have done it better myself, so im using yours to explain my world too since we share the same one. Ok anyway about the fic. I am so glad u posted this. I can not wate to read the rest. So come on lets have another chapter.
Love forever Tana
person Savage Rose
schedule December 24, 2002 at 12:00 AM
I love this story! I think i know where it's going but I cant wait for you to put it into words. AUs are the best! I cant wait for Darren and Daniel to be grown up. This looks like there could definitely be some sob chapters! Cant wait. i hope you continue this soon :)! One thing though, the chapters are awfully short, maybe you could make them longer.