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November 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Sorry...
But that was bloody awful.
On second thought...
I'm not sorry. =\
But that was bloody awful.
On second thought...
I'm not sorry. =\
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November 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
that was retarded
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July 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow that was so utterly dissapointing. You put no effort into that.
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April 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Awesome!
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April 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
That was terrible, it simply sucked. Think about a plot or a good way to write better porn...
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March 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
WOW!!!!!! That was GREat
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January 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I don't know what story the other reviewers where reading but this is bloody awful. I'll give you points for being able to spell better than the average 12 year old but for plot, character development, and sensuality - a big fat zero. In the words of a friend who also read this story - this was merely an excuse to write porn. Please, don't write any more stories.
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January 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
oh so hot! i always wondered what might happen if those two got together... hes so sexy, and shes so hot... i luved it!
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December 25, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Sucky
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July 30, 2003 at 12:00 AM
good but it is Too Short