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by Aireroswen

person Anon
schedule January 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
you can not leave it like that poor orli
person Anon
schedule January 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
wow great chapter. Update soon please
person Arnettra
schedule January 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wow! This was dark! Is it wrong of me that I enjoyed it so much. You took us through every agonizing step of Orlando's experience and it was terrifying and very real. I could see all of this happening. You have a great relationship with details, you let them add to the story but not overwhelm it. Good job.
schedule January 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Intriguing! Very intriguing! Please update soon!
person Jellybelly
schedule January 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Sooner than soon! Bad Viggo is just too hot.
person Sagarian
schedule December 27, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Dayum! Hellspawn!Viggo is not one to be fucked with! OMG, this chapter was intense. I can't wait to see how far Viggo goes in his descent into madness. And that last line about Viggo saying it's time Orlando felt pain like Viggo had been feeling was wowzers. Very appropriately creepy! Do post the next chapter soon!
person Lydia NightShade
schedule December 26, 2003 at 12:00 AM
OMG!!!!

You so have to update this soon! I've been dying for a good Viggo/Orli angst fic with Viggo as the bad guy! It's so unexpected that's why I like it! Please update soon! I really want to read more of this, you have NO idea!!!
person Geena
schedule December 25, 2003 at 12:00 AM
ditto! continue it, please!
person Arnettra
schedule December 25, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I love this! Bastard Viggo is awesome. And your descriptif thf their fight is very realistic. Write more and quickly, please!!