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February 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
???? i never understood m preg...but this is good...its funny
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October 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
^^ I really want to read more of this fic. I really love it!
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August 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
^_^Yay! I am happy !!!! The continuation of your beautiful fic there!!! ^^ I still love it and I am waiting to know what will happen!
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July 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
YES!!! An Update!! *dances around* good chapter!!! I can't wait for more!
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March 31, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Pink and Black! wow i wish my baby room had been that color or colors, but i got stuck with white. Anywho, great chapter! keep writing
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February 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
oo I love love love this fic!! i realize you just updated, but you must update more right now! Although I love this fic i have one probelm with and I don't mean to upset you, but the part where Joel and Billy tell the others about the preg seems kinda empty!
Bye now!
Nileregwen
Bye now!
Nileregwen
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January 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
NICE NOT BAD AT ALL REALLY IT WAS GOOD NOW DO SOMETHING REALLY IMPORTANT UPDATE THE FREAKING FIC. ITS SO GOOD YAY BILLY GONNA HAVE A BABY I LOVE MPREG HAVE NO IDEAD WHY BUT I DO WERID GIRL AINT I. BUT UDATE THIS IS NOT A BAD FIC, DAN NEED TO STUDY STUPID TEST DANM PROFS HATE EM ALL BUT HEY ATLEAST I'LL PASS HOPEFULL. WELL UPDATE ANY WAY'S THE FIC IS WAY COOL
JA NE :)
JA NE :)
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January 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
hell i loved it . man i just hope you write more chapters. i mean i just have to know what happens.
pl,plz,plz,plz,plz,update soon.
p.s. your fic fuckin' kicks ass!!!!!!!!!!!! ^0^
pl,plz,plz,plz,plz,update soon.
p.s. your fic fuckin' kicks ass!!!!!!!!!!!! ^0^
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January 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
LOL, this isn't a bad beginning, but there are some things I'd like to critique. First off, use their first names a bit less. There were times when you could have said him and the reader still would have known who the character was talking about. Second, get yourself a beta. That way you won't have small errors in grammar and things like that. Third, add a bit more dialogue and emotion. It's a pretty big thing that Billy is pregnant, seeing as how he's a GUY. Just add more description. This could turn out to be completely hilarious, or really dramatic, I'd like to see which way you take...I'll be checking back to see if you've updated... ~Cheers :)
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January 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Okay, obviously I don't know how to read, because you've already got a beta... That's what I get for reading fics at 4 in the ing.ing...