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December 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love this story!! I think i''ve read it about 20 to 25 times or so. I'm waiting for the sequal of this story, the 7th chatper i mean. And The war ( the begining) for chatper 14. Veyr good writing and i so love thesetwo together even though they dont want to be or whatever in their mind.
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November 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Holy SHIT. Now THIS is good writing. Hell, this is EXCELLENT writing. *is jealous* Wow, I'm not one for actor fics, but damn girl, you can WRITE. :) Now I'm totally a Natalie/Hayden shipper. :) And I blame YOU.
*runs off to read the sequel*
*runs off to read the sequel*
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November 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
amazing, i loved it... even tho i started reading the sequel first it was so good that i simply had to check out the first story which i enjoyed just as much! so hurry an finish the sequel dammit!!! lol good job
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August 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow! This story was great. Just great!!!!
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August 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i absolutely LOVED this fan fic. one of the best i've ever read. thank you for sharing it.
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June 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i love this story so SO much!! great JOB! keep up the good work!
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June 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I wouldn't normally go for the real person fics, but I admit, this one caught my curiosity. Obviously your summary did its job. So, well written! There were some fantatsic moments in the language of this fic, and some great one liners too. I killed myself laughing with the 'the salad's already dead' one...
Very sweet, and very touching... and, to my surprise, despite the fact that i am quite un-Christian, the religious themes and occassional mention of 'destiny' didn't bother me at all. Normally, that kind of talk makes me squirm, but you did it very elegantly. Some positively delicious scenes there- you certainly know how to draw out tension.
Very sweet, and very touching... and, to my surprise, despite the fact that i am quite un-Christian, the religious themes and occassional mention of 'destiny' didn't bother me at all. Normally, that kind of talk makes me squirm, but you did it very elegantly. Some positively delicious scenes there- you certainly know how to draw out tension.
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June 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Why am I in the RP section reading stories? It started with my favorite actor and it's just spiraling. Your's was the second story I clicked on after I clicked on the genre on a whim. I only got past the first couple of sentences of the first story I clicked on.
Where yours...yours made me stay up past my bedtime to finish reading it. It gave me gooshy feelings and happy squeels. It was so beautiful. And perfect. And...right.
You're an incredible writer and can spin a tale than people can't put down.
I can't wait to read the sequel to this tomorrow (A sequal! Yea!).
Where yours...yours made me stay up past my bedtime to finish reading it. It gave me gooshy feelings and happy squeels. It was so beautiful. And perfect. And...right.
You're an incredible writer and can spin a tale than people can't put down.
I can't wait to read the sequel to this tomorrow (A sequal! Yea!).
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June 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Bonnie,
I recently joined AAEF's group over at Yahoo and have been enjoying reading the work there, especially yours and Kelly's. I was a little hesitant to step into the realm of reading actor fic, but my curiousity was spiked so I printed 3 of your stories out and read them over the weekend.
I was absolutely blown away.
I was so taken by this story in particular that I read it TWICE. And that is not something I do very often. Once this story swept me into world of actor fic, especially these two actors, I was hooked. I love your writing style and how well you seem to bring to life your "characters". I must confess, that a touch a guilt swept over me at first for indulging in such a naughty pleasure as this - but the sheer quality of the work helped me quickly get over that.
I am now a huge fan and will scamper off to read more of your work. I saw over at AAEF that you said to someone that you had written 5 or 6 chapters in a story called "You STILL Can't Control Destiny", which is a sequel to this one I persume. If so, where on earth can I find it?
I recently joined AAEF's group over at Yahoo and have been enjoying reading the work there, especially yours and Kelly's. I was a little hesitant to step into the realm of reading actor fic, but my curiousity was spiked so I printed 3 of your stories out and read them over the weekend.
I was absolutely blown away.
I was so taken by this story in particular that I read it TWICE. And that is not something I do very often. Once this story swept me into world of actor fic, especially these two actors, I was hooked. I love your writing style and how well you seem to bring to life your "characters". I must confess, that a touch a guilt swept over me at first for indulging in such a naughty pleasure as this - but the sheer quality of the work helped me quickly get over that.
I am now a huge fan and will scamper off to read more of your work. I saw over at AAEF that you said to someone that you had written 5 or 6 chapters in a story called "You STILL Can't Control Destiny", which is a sequel to this one I persume. If so, where on earth can I find it?
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May 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You sooo need to make a sequel!