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for Dirty Girls

by normalchick

person Emanuel
schedule June 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I'll say it again - I really enjoy reading this story. I also read the feedback in which you're "accused" of changing the characters. I'm not sure if i concur - jealousy can be a bitch. It is obvious that the thing they have is something both girls don't really understand (at least in the first 3 chapters), but that might have changed by the fourth chapter. As all their encounters are only loosely linked, you might have a flashback in chapter 5 in store which explains why Christina is suddenly so upset about the whole Britney/Justin thing. Anyway, I hope you'll update this story sometime, I'd really like to read more!
person ^CH^
schedule February 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
That is incredibly hot... and hot.. and hot.. and did I mention fucking HOT?

Anyways, you really gotta update soon, cause... that shit was hot..
person BritneyLuver09
schedule January 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
So Update Soooooon. It is SOOOOOOOOO GOOOOOOOOOOOD!!!!!! Please Update!!
person X-girl
schedule December 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love your story and I just gotta read more.Update soon please.
person Emanuel
schedule December 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ok, enough with the teasing! Post the next chapters already! :-)
person Jes
schedule August 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Not bad. There were a ton of spelling errors. But, nothing that can't be fixed. :)
person pheebly
schedule August 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That's a good read! YAY!.... I love good smut in the late night hours. :) More please.
person Birdie
schedule May 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I luv it. Keep writting please.
person Dragonia
schedule April 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
wow that was so awesome I can't wait for the next chapter please hurry with it '-'
schedule April 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i really like your story, but you've changed the characters a little. the characterization of both britney and christina have changed dramatically. brit and chris in the first three chapters had a secret relationship that they didn't know how to lable, but they seemed to genuinely care for each other. especially in the third chapter when they reminisce about their meeting. in the fourth chapter, brit is more of the ditzy blonde and chris is the overtly jealous butch. their personalities have really changed. even so...it's still a very good story and i hope that you continue and update soon.