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for Getting home

by timecapsule

person Zeh Dwarf
schedule January 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Very nice, not too over the top and just enough smut to convey the idea. Your ending, however, was rather frustrating. Nevertheless I enjoyed reading very much.
person MrsMonaghan
schedule October 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
You see Dom is more me... I love him... (*hint* *hint* my name...) but...GOD! I WOULD NOT MIND COMING HOME TO ORLANDO AFTER READING THIS! GAH! THAT IWOW.WOW....
person Laurel
schedule August 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I love you.
Oh my God. How did you know I needed that?
This is what ever girl needs, a small smut fantasy about Orlando to...er...ease the boredom.
Thanks for the pick me up.
Did I mention I loved you for this?
person Smeagol
schedule July 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
take the goddam knickers off you peice of shit!
person aewnaur
schedule June 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
and then your kids come bursting into the room and wake you up, damn it! lol.. Eh Gads, what a dream..
person Kouga\'s girl
schedule June 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wow that was to hot DAmn you for stoping is is the next part lol
person Tari
schedule April 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wait!!!!!! You can not just stop like that!! You can't!!! I'm hungry for more..please say you'll continue!!!
person Alyanah
schedule April 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
You're being mean again! stoping it there! *shakes her head and makes tsking sounds*

i love your fics.. the girls in them are so lucky... *sighs*

well.. congrats for it

******* Alyanah
person Stacy
schedule April 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Boy would I love for this to be the scenario when I get home from work...just what a gal needs after a long, dismal day! This wouldn't include a foot rub, would it?
person Just me, myself, and I
schedule March 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
you know, if you leave it there and don't finish the story, my mind will go places? Anyway, FINISH IT!!!! It really is good so far.