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December 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
you HAVE to update!!! please!!! i need another update!!!
ASOTA
ASOTA
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January 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
And where is the second part? this is really Good.... I wanna read more
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January 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I remember reading this ages ago. I still like it very much. It's so heartbreaking. Well written, beautiful and sad. Keep it up!
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August 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow! You write amazingly well! This fic is one of the best I have ever read.
Please write more!!
Please write more!!
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July 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow! This fic was awsome!! Where have you learn to write like this?
This fic makes me to wanna cry! Poor poor Totchi-chan!
I'd like to ask you one thing, though.
I know that Tadaima means: I'm home/i'm here.
But what does Totchi's reply Okaeri nasai mean? :o
That only made me wonder.. and Tasukete meand Help, right?
But now to the fic.. You write very well and like I said, I had a huge lump in my throuth when I was reading this!
I like the idea of this fic, this is very new kind of plot. I hope you write more (very) soon!!
I will definitely review the second part too! See ya!
This fic makes me to wanna cry! Poor poor Totchi-chan!
I'd like to ask you one thing, though.
I know that Tadaima means: I'm home/i'm here.
But what does Totchi's reply Okaeri nasai mean? :o
That only made me wonder.. and Tasukete meand Help, right?
But now to the fic.. You write very well and like I said, I had a huge lump in my throuth when I was reading this!
I like the idea of this fic, this is very new kind of plot. I hope you write more (very) soon!!
I will definitely review the second part too! See ya!
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July 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Damn, this has got real raw potentiAL, YOU COULD GO FAR WITH SUCH A WONDERFULLY CRAFTED PIECE! Sorry, evil caplock key, but I mean it, SERIOUSLY.
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May 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Ooooooh, nice. Very nice. Ouch, poor Toshiya. I reallel sel sad for him now! Kaoru, how cruel! More angst! More angst!
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May 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Ahh, I didn't log in. But I just wanna say that this is one of the best Diru fics I've read! ^_^
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December 23, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Hey, great story!
I like it, though it is a pity you make kaoru such a bastard... but he's the perfect one for this role ^^;
I hope you hurry up with the next part, I am eager to read more!
Go on!
(sorry bout my mistakes, I'm German...)
I like it, though it is a pity you make kaoru such a bastard... but he's the perfect one for this role ^^;
I hope you hurry up with the next part, I am eager to read more!
Go on!
(sorry bout my mistakes, I'm German...)
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July 28, 2003 at 12:00 AM
::begins to cry:: This is such a sad fic! But I luff it anyway! ::huggles fic:: You did a really good job...I'm not familiar with Kaoru and Toshiya's personalities, but I did like how you characterized them. I think there's only one other Kaoru/Toshiya fic where Kaoru was abusive to Totchi. I guess I admit that I like to read a fic such as this every so often. I get kind of bored reading fics where everything goes fine. I like angst. Angst good. As long as no one dies...I'll cry a lot.
Now...to save myself from being terribly off topic ^^ I really enjoyed reading this and I hope you can update soon. I know I can't wait to see what happens. This has so much potential; having a good start is really important. Again, you're doing a really good job so far. ^_^
~StrawberryPocky
Now...to save myself from being terribly off topic ^^ I really enjoyed reading this and I hope you can update soon. I know I can't wait to see what happens. This has so much potential; having a good start is really important. Again, you're doing a really good job so far. ^_^
~StrawberryPocky