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for Dark Heart

by Bells

person EscagirlUK
schedule May 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hey! Loved the fic. I loved the cute little power plays Murdoc had with 2D. And it's nice to see 2D portreyed as something more than the vapid moron he looks. I knew he had hidden depths. I'm not into the s/m aspect of the fic, but I'll deal. You can't read a Murdoc/2D fic without the s/m, because that is so much a part of their whacked out relationship. ::pauses:: Well, I can deal as long as it doesn't go graphic. I can't read graphic s/m, it's just sick. But, anyways, I loved the way at the end 2D is being all nuce and caring.

Anh, hey, I wanna know what happens next! Write us a nice romanticy sequel. Murdoc so deserves some kindness and love.
person .
schedule January 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Its a wonderful story, strange , however that makes it all the better. I feel that you should keep this story going, not only because i liked it but because you opened up so many questions and possiblities that it would just really be a shame to leave them alone and not explore them in later chapters. Keep up the good writing, im sure i`ll enjoy reading your other works as well.
person varenoea
schedule October 20, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Whoah, part 6 is up! Yippieh! I was so anticipated for it that I already e a e a 6- pages- long continuation myself and was jsut about to ask you whether I could upload it here in your tradition... but that´s unnecessary now. Anyway, I´m off to read it...
person slashhammer64
schedule September 19, 2003 at 12:00 AM
this is the best gorillaz story i've ever read. for once 2D isn't a whiny little pussy and there is actual depth in the writing. please continue this!
person purplemoon16
schedule June 26, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Aiii, usually I never read stories like this, but I decided to since there's only two Gorillaz fics up. I like the "stronger" (he is, in some ways) 2-D; you never see any fics like that. I love how you tell the story from Muds POV - you make it work extremelly well. ^_^" Just one thing - I noticed on ch. 3 (I think it was): "Hentais" should be spelled "hentai". When you translate any Japanese word over, it is the same both singular or pularized. One hentai, five hentai: ahhh, scary!! XD Anyhow, I love this story! ^___^Y
-fahsky-
person moonglaive
schedule May 21, 2003 at 12:00 AM
This was the first Gorrilaz story I've read, and I'm very impressed! The imagery and the characters are awesome!! Keep up the good work!
person faye
schedule April 30, 2003 at 12:00 AM
this is really good. it's like your taking all the myths of gorillaz and saying "no, this is what really happened." telling the 'real' story of the band. very nice. keep it up.
person ruby red
schedule April 11, 2003 at 12:00 AM
not bad...good imageing very good