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November 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
this started off really good. but then you ruined in at the end by rushing it - knowing she was pregnant after a month? i know it can happen but blimey that was too fast.
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July 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
..wow. Very, very, very, VERY WELL DONE!!!! I LOVED IT! Very impressice, a wonderful fic!!!
My only problem with it is that it needs some proofreading. At least once a chapter there is a spelling/typing error that is a little hard to figure out. Aside from that, GREAT JOB!!!!
My only problem with it is that it needs some proofreading. At least once a chapter there is a spelling/typing error that is a little hard to figure out. Aside from that, GREAT JOB!!!!
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July 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Your fic started out very nicely, but towards the end you let it drop. The story seemed rushed. If I were you, I would go back and re-write the ending with more details and events. I loved the plot!!
~Annie~
~Annie~
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January 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Long, but totally worth it. You're a wonderful writer.
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April 8, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This story was amazing. It was so sweet and it's definitely one of the best fan-fic stories I've read in a while.
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April 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I LOVE IT!!! TO CUTE!!!!!
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April 1, 2004 at 12:00 AM
i am in love with orlando bloom at the moment because of this story. very well written. sweet. wow. i loved it. =)