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December 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Very good! Spell checking is the only thing you need to work on, and that's really a minor thing for this.
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July 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hey, I like your story. Please continue
You are talented, all the best Steffi
You are talented, all the best Steffi
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April 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
yes, please do one from her point of view. liked how you have written this, please update soon.
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March 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
that was really good you should totally write another chapter
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January 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Your short was very good. I am a writer myself, and you have talent. I actually got caught up in the moment. I could see the characters in my head. (Of course it helps to have a vision of Orlando already in one's head! LOL!) You should consider a beginning, fleshing out more of the story, and an ending. Give it some thought. I'll check back.
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May 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
hi!
i would love to read more of this!
hope you update soon!
*********Alyanah
i would love to read more of this!
hope you update soon!
*********Alyanah
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May 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Good start. Update soon.