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February 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I read this a long time ago,but never commented.Wonderful job!I love sad stories.
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January 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
It was good but you could of made it more intense. Bring more scene and emotiojn into your words. Just food for thought.
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February 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wonderful, absolutly wonderful.
Even though Ville-darlin died (*sniff*) but still,
does it go on or you you finished?
If it does, write fast!
If it doesn't I want to read another HIM fic by you!
Even though Ville-darlin died (*sniff*) but still,
does it go on or you you finished?
If it does, write fast!
If it doesn't I want to read another HIM fic by you!
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September 6, 2003 at 12:00 AM
yeah, sorry for mistakes, but I´m no master of the types, i know it drives you mad to read them and it can spoil a whole story...but is that a reason to ...me?
i promise to keep the rate as low as possible...
i promise to keep the rate as low as possible...
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August 31, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Hello Sweetheart
what a wonderfully poignant idea. Strange coupling but it keeps it neatly within the band. I bow down to you as you obviously speak a second or consecutive language. I do not. But your moments become comical when the language isn't correct. Lounge is the main room of your house where you relax and listen to HIM and maybe watch MTV, The thought of someone getting cancer of this spoils the moment, you meant Lung cancer from too many marlboro's, that would be more appropriate. and a cerebral..........what?
Like I said you have the gift of another language, I can only speak one. So my comments relate to checking out your words rather than your ability or style.
Overall comment.......POIGNANT
what a wonderfully poignant idea. Strange coupling but it keeps it neatly within the band. I bow down to you as you obviously speak a second or consecutive language. I do not. But your moments become comical when the language isn't correct. Lounge is the main room of your house where you relax and listen to HIM and maybe watch MTV, The thought of someone getting cancer of this spoils the moment, you meant Lung cancer from too many marlboro's, that would be more appropriate. and a cerebral..........what?
Like I said you have the gift of another language, I can only speak one. So my comments relate to checking out your words rather than your ability or style.
Overall comment.......POIGNANT
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August 11, 2003 at 12:00 AM
as i said... BEAUTIFUL! keep going! (no need to let dear ville die too often, though... (*g*) )