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for Breaking Through

by gardenrose

person safire_slash
schedule September 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaahkkkk! are you continuing this?! pleeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeease, i'll beg if i have to!
person Alias
schedule August 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
A very nice little story you have going here! I'm not sure how I managed to even find this site last night but I figured what the hell and started reading this fic. I read 3 chapters last night and spent 5 hours this morning reading the rest of it and am thoroughly thrilled! I am particularily rather fond of Mr Jones and so desperately found myself feeling for him in your writing. However, after reading the reviews, I must say thank gawd I saw this after 31 chapters because I think I would have lost interest after two and a half years of waiting. ;) Please don't keep it going for another two and a half years!

person akasting2002
schedule August 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
it was a great update, hun. can't wait to see what happened next time. and please - more R rated scene ^__~
person Ashra
schedule June 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Nice story you've got goin' here! I love the way you've made them act, the problems that they have, and all that stuff! I really hope you update soon! Laterz!
person Delilah
schedule May 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
this story is excellent!!! I love it!! Can't wait for you to finish it.......
person Heather
schedule April 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I realize that your intention was sex in excess but I think that it's perhaps a little bit too much. The story seems to get stuck in a few places near the beginning. After a while it starts moving again but I think if you toned it down it would be better. Too late to change now I guess. But I do believe that some sex was necessary.

I also cried at the end of chapter 28 (part 30?). I'm dying to find out what happens next. Please continue. :)
person 10minutesinaroom
schedule January 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is the most credible story I've read. Even though I don't know the guys, I can't help wondering "Was she eavesdropping on their intimate moments?"

You've done a bang-up job of exploring a very likely stormy scenario between these two! It really leaves me with few words to say how intensely this story moves me.

Really looking forward to more!

10minutes
person vkr
schedule December 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
another great chapter. can't wait to see next
person akasting2002
schedule December 24, 2003 at 12:00 AM
FINALLY! THANK YOY FOR UPDATE. YOU DID GREAT STORY
person LindaG
schedule May 21, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Interesting twist you have here. Daniel friends with a Drag Queen.
And Darren drinking a beer? *lol*... a first to be remembered, I think...
I enjoyed this chapter a lot.