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for Breaking Through

by gardenrose

person LindaG
schedule May 9, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Sad, but romantically sweet chapter. Very good story.
person Linus
schedule April 19, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Shit, this is a good story!
I really love it. It's really sensual and sexy and beautiful and heart breaking.
And you tease! Left it there...
person LindaG
schedule April 16, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Well, I'd certainly like to kill Elena, I know that.
I hope something pleasant happens sometime in this story.
All this paStarStarting to get depressing.
Pretty well written, though.
person LindaG
schedule April 10, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Very good chapter.
I don't understand Darren's pain very well, either. I hope it will all be revealed at some point. Hopefully before it tears Daniel apart.
person LindaG
schedule April 3, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter. Wow.. Sizzling in the bedroom, I must say. Great job.
person LindaG
schedule April 1, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Too short! But interesting. And cute. Poor Darren- the singer at a loss for words... Can't wait to see what happens next.
person LindaG
schedule March 22, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Darren is quite the horny little bugger isn't he? I'm surprised they ever have time for music. :P
Interesting updates. Look forward to more.
person mina
schedule March 21, 2003 at 12:00 AM
wow, darren has some serious issues he needs to be working out. And they need to stop putting everything on hold to keep having sex! (though we do love it *grin*) Nothing will ever work out if everytime they start to talk it gets interrupted for sex! Lord! and Darren claiming he's not gay...funny, funny, little man.
person LindaG
schedule March 15, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Interesting update. Enjoyed the interon aon at the cafe.
I look forward to the next chapter. Thanks.
person Pomona
schedule March 14, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Daniel’s thoughts were heavy like cotton... ooh wow, I'm speechless as per usual. I could see *everything*... go you!