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for Breaking Through

by gardenrose

person LindaG
schedule March 13, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Really enjoyed this chapter. Hot, sexy and sweet. I loved the last part: “I want you to come with me. Home. To my parents,” Darren exhaled heavily.
I'm curious as to what will happen next.
Hope you post again, soon.
person Foraoo
schedule March 9, 2003 at 12:00 AM
The intense darkness of this fic really makes it stand out. And the manager really reminds me of the bitchy agent off 'Fooytballers Wives'...I bet on one here has heard of that? O.K It was a compliment anyway as I love her. Hope you update soon.
person LindaG
schedule March 9, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Very sexy chapter. Very hot. I am loving it!
Please update again, soon. ^__^
person LindaG
schedule March 7, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I appreciate you updating. Poor Daniel. Looking worse and worse for him.
person LindaG
schedule March 6, 2003 at 12:00 AM
aww... poor boys. I hope they work something out soon. They are just so sad.
The taxi scene was quite hot, though.
I hope you update soon.
person dazzy
schedule March 5, 2003 at 12:00 AM
aarrrgh... SO good!! I love stories that tickles my imagination :D. More, please!
person LindaG
schedule March 5, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Aww... Poor Daniel.
Loved Darren's look though. Already blowing money on clothes and they've only got one song so far.
And a promise of a HOT night. :P
Good job!
person LindaG
schedule March 3, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Well, I loved this chapter. Poor Daniel. Darren is fooling him.
They'll have sweet love in the bedroom. But if Darren is moving out, when will they be together.
Sweet chapter, though.
person LindaG
schedule March 1, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Excellent chapter. Humor, love, and mad passionate sex. What more can be asked for?
Wonderful job. I look forward to the next chapter.
person dazzy
schedule February 28, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Oh yes... I couldn't imagine better solution :) Go on!