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for Flying With Eagles

by Zar

person actoratheart
schedule March 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
holy frickin' god.

over the course of three days i read up to chapter 50-- and oh my frickin' god. i'd always just read fanfics of characters, never the people, and i think i'm going to be spoiled for any others i might read. i don't know how you did it and i could never name it, but you captured some element of viggo's personality right on. [fyi i waited till the end to review...] it always annoys me when people say they know what an actor's like from the dvd shit... i mean come on. you know they're excellent actors, who says they're not just acting for the interviewer? they have to keep up appearances! (tho actually you don't quite feel that with viggo, but that's beside the point.) i can't name all the things i like b/c i'll be here forever (no joke) but i have to say a couple things:

-the fact that "Beanie" was Sean Bean completely caught me off guard. i just figured all that time that that was the guy's name.
-the incident in the japanese restaurant was absolutely PRICELESS.
-i had to go offline earlier than i wanted to last night, and i had to stop at chapter... what was it, 33 i think, the one that ends just as he is passing out from all the smoke and stuff? the worst cliffhanger IN TEH WORLD especially when i had school the next day adn a mini-SAT for english to take. damnit.
-i was half-expecting/two-thirds hoping that orli would wake him up. i figured he'd prob'ly be out that long, perhaps orli could've come back by then... it was so disapponting (in a good way) when Beanie woke him up. *sigh* but the thing about not having anything else to do was perfect... i had appendicitis right before thanksgiving two years ago, and i have to wonder how my mom spent the time. as far as i know she was just sitting by my bedside watching me be in agony for all like three days. how depressing.

unfortunately i have to go... three hours online and my mom's going to explode-- but there was more i had to say, sorry i can't.
keep up the fantastic job!
person Anya
schedule February 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I have vacation now..... I need some motivation so I don't sleep the whole week, and therefore miss a lot of free relaxing days...
Which could be better if there came another chappie up;)......So I have a suggestion: You open your computer, write (while your nice to our Gods;))
and then I'll review....You'll make a Fan REALLY Happy...........I'm so bored right now that I'm on the verge of crying!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
HOOOOOOPE the see some of your Gorgeous Work SOON:):):)

Muah.......Anya
person Anya
schedule February 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
SOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO Sweet................Thank you sooo much....MUAH:)
Thought Valentine's Day was gonna be plain-boring but then Wupti and I'm reading the next chapter of this REALLY GREAT story....hehe...
Made my day, so many thanks, Girl:)
My heart goes out to Beanie. Hope you make up for it in the later chapters...*hint hint*....
Prayers from me, that you'll get No what-so-ever writer's block at all ever. At least not until this story is finished.....Update SOOOOOON, cause i'm already jiggling my foot impaciently!!!!!!!!
Love it.....Keep going......Big Hugs
person Shui
schedule February 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*giggles* Yes I reveiw all the time. I cant help it though, I feel like I have to. You deserve a fangirlish reveiw! And as for the crying thing, any good writter loves to make the reader cry. Make your fans cry! I love that logic!! (Jhonen Vasquez). And yes, poor sad Beanie. *hugs little image of Beanie* Also, we your dear fans demand that you make a valentines day chapter with the Orlando and the Viggo together. We demand it. If you dont....we probably wont do anything. As a matter of fact we wont. We'll read whatever you wish to be the next chapter, review like happy fangirls (or boys. depending) and be happy. But, do note, we would be very happy if there was a squishy Orli Viggo chapter. *nods* Hmm ok well....this has dragged on yes? *giggles* I shall leave you alone now, until next chapter! Mwuahhaha!!

~Shui
person osdip
schedule February 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I really really luv this fic so much. i love it when i check the page and the little chapter number has gone up cuz you've updated! can't wait for more of it. keep it up. x
person Kiran
schedule February 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Mwahahahahaha! *Struts proudly* I helped! Well...the late nights are only at the weekend I guess, and holidays - school comes first I suppose *Shifty eyes*

Aaaaaaaaanyway - interlude...hmm, I think you're trying to torture us. It was beautiful and insightful and all manner of wonderful adjectives, it made me sad. Very sad...*Perks* But it should aaaaaaall be better next chapter *Crosses fingers and looks hopeful* Love you and may your writer's block demons never plague you.

Kiran
person Tanesa
schedule February 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Zar-
Great chapter!! Did you have a particular piece of music in mind that gave you inspiration? Just curious. I am glad to see that good old adorable Viggo is learning to accept the Leopard man, and I hope the latter does the same for Orli's sake at least. Reliable Beanie always there when they need him. I am still loving your story and I hope both Viggo and Orli get some answers to their questions soon, and perhaps some action between them. After all, they can work around his impotence, or Viggo can at least understand what happened. Keep writing! Tanesa
person Anya
schedule February 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Those lines:

“I don’t know how to prove it!”

He rolls his eyes at me in exasperation.

“You’re supposed to kiss me!”

Favorite in the whole story....Made me all Mushy anf giggly....ihhhh...This chapter made me so happy, I wanna dance around and squeal:)
Thank you, thank you, thank YOU for this chapter and for letting it end happily.......Write soon....Want more, more MORE!!!!!!! Hear me!!!!!!!
Don't exhaust yourself by staying up alte at night, your fans can wait a couple of days (I think;))........Muah....
person Anya
schedule February 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hey:)

Really sweet chapter (52). Viggo is soooo cute you just wanna cuddle and hold him close for all eternity!!
And I'm a little mad at Orli. As Viggo said, he should only be sleeping in that bed with Viggo....
Gonna read chap.53 now....Hope your nice to them????!!
Than's for keeping up the steady updatng...........Love your work

Bye:)
person Shui
schedule February 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
YEEEEEE! *bounds and wipes tears from eyes* That was so sweet! Jeez you made me teary. *sniffle* You'll update soon right? Please? Pleeeeease? *begs and wipes more tears away* That chapter was so sweet....*gives you award* One of the cutest, if not the cutest. *hugs* You made me almost cry! Im not over it yet. Update? Please?

~Shui