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October 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
lovin it! i wish you would get more reviews because it certainly deserves more than it has!
i cant wait for the next update!
email me, if you can when you update!
emily
i cant wait for the next update!
email me, if you can when you update!
emily
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October 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
why have you stopped! dont do this to me! please finish it! love it love it love it!
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February 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMG this story is so hot and realistic!! I wonder if they did have a cofee afterwards or what would happen next! ;) Good job.
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December 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
All I can say is wow, how intense what that! lol You did a really REALLY good job writing this, the whole thing was detailed and just brilliant, deffo recommending this hehe xxx
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July 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This was so erotic, i love it! Continue please!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Damn, now i need a shower u made me horny!
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July 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hi, I don't know if you are still taking reviews or not but i just wanted to take the time to say "BRAVO". This was a very vivid story. Will there be anything continued? There could be and I am sure that it would be just as good. BRAVA, dear lady!
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June 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oooh, this is just getting better and better. I usually don't like PWPs because they turn tacky pretty soon. I knew this one would be something else. You should post it on other sites where it's sure to get more exposure.
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June 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I can promise you that people are reading this. I know I've done that before: read, liked and not reviewed. I really like your writing so please do continue writing this.
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June 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I like this. It's very raw, well written. I'd like to read more of your stuff.
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June 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I like this story, I like it alot. It's different, I haven't read anything like this before. It's very well writen and you know how to use your words.