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for Wounded Hearts

by PhoenixRose

person crescent
schedule September 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
More? Please?
schedule September 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Thank you all for your kind reviews. I'll try to get the next chapter up, but we've been in a long, drawn out process of moving out, so all my notes and my chapters *sob* are in storage . (Although, I could always ask for a ride I suppose... :p Nah. Anyways, I'm going to work on a short piece that's based on one of the rp's that me and a close friend have been working on... Look out for it!
person yamiloner990
schedule August 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM
please continue.
person Devil A. Slytherin
schedule July 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
*o* ===> my face^^

another chapter please?^^

bisous^^
person Maruken
schedule July 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I like, nice potential. I eagerly await the next installment to this beautiful piece of artistry.
person vulgar kid
schedule June 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I really like your fic. this is nicely written. you have a very gd plot....I am eagerly waiting for the next chapter.
I dun have much impression on the real Kisaki, so....I dun care how you mould him:P. but i like the melancholic Kyo~

much much impressed by the way you expressed the scene with "parallel time line": with "Kyo and kisaki" VS "die and shin and kaoru". (i guess it is them?)
person Skwishee
schedule June 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
ooh please continue. ^_^ This is very well written. Incidentally, with all I've heard about Kisaki in the REAL world.....I already hate him. So it's not a far stretch to say his presence in any fiction irritates me ^^ Which is a good thing I think since in fiction it's prefered to already have a love or distaste for someone to make it seem more "real" . Anyway, I'm rambling. Please please post more. I'd love to read it.
person Neko
schedule June 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Please more!!! é_è
I just love this fic.. The angst!! .. Poor Kyo... I just love it^___^___^=