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August 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
What an excellent story - I love how you capture the pathos of each character.
(Plus you can spell and your grammar is correct.)
(Plus you can spell and your grammar is correct.
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July 16, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I'm getting a Exit to Eden vibe here, except better ;)
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May 30, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Wow... This was kinda kinky, but very sweet! Reminds me of a story I once wrote, too. It's hard to read a story about my fave band, though. ::Sniff:: But I loved this one. ^-^
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May 26, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Wow, I don't check up on this story for a few weeks and you finish the whole thing!
And what an ending it was! I really can't give you two enough praise for this amazing fic. The whole concept in itself was brilliant, and then the twists, like Anton being Darren's father, just made it even more astounding. These last climatic chapters were possibly the best of the whole fic (though it's hard to say). The action and entwining motives never had a down point, and never grew confusing. Details were added at just the right moments, and the foreshadowing to Annabell-Lee's death and story was superb. Not to mention the sheer beauty of the Anabell-Lee motif you created with Poe's poem. I'm a sucker for that poem anway, but y'all brought it to life. At was absolutely gorgeous the way you integrated lines in with the plot and what people were saying, and made an incredibly powerful point about their love and her death.
And finally, the epilogue was wonderful. A perfect tie-up of loose ends and emotions. A classic happy ending, not even because everyone was happy, but use use of the growth and gratification of the characters. Well, and because of the amazingly hot scene between Dar and Dan at the end, I mean come on, how could that not make for a h end ending?!
And what an ending it was! I really can't give you two enough praise for this amazing fic. The whole concept in itself was brilliant, and then the twists, like Anton being Darren's father, just made it even more astounding. These last climatic chapters were possibly the best of the whole fic (though it's hard to say). The action and entwining motives never had a down point, and never grew confusing. Details were added at just the right moments, and the foreshadowing to Annabell-Lee's death and story was superb. Not to mention the sheer beauty of the Anabell-Lee motif you created with Poe's poem. I'm a sucker for that poem anway, but y'all brought it to life. At was absolutely gorgeous the way you integrated lines in with the plot and what people were saying, and made an incredibly powerful point about their love and her death.
And finally, the epilogue was wonderful. A perfect tie-up of loose ends and emotions. A classic happy ending, not even because everyone was happy, but use use of the growth and gratification of the characters. Well, and because of the amazingly hot scene between Dar and Dan at the end, I mean come on, how could that not make for a h end ending?!
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May 21, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Wow! Wow, wow, wow! What an amazing ending to an amazing story *happy sigh*
I'm so glad it all ended this way. That Daniel finally seems to be able to satisfy his own needs =^__^=
And I almost cried when reading this *sniff* It was just so beautifully written ^_^
I'm so glad it all ended this way. That Daniel finally seems to be able to satisfy his own needs =^__^=
And I almost cried when reading this *sniff* It was just so beautifully written ^_^
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May 20, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Wow *is at the edge of her seat* This is brilliant! You guys have done an excellent job!
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May 13, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Oh my god that was such a good climax! I can't believe Williams evil ass is gone! And gone to hell!? Daniels bits were heartbreaking as was Darrens confusement at the end, nice to see Antons there for them tho. I can't wait to see what you guys are going to do next. One great fic. *Thumbs up*
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May 11, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Can i just say: Williams parts are mesmorising. Truely.
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May 10, 2003 at 12:00 AM
*shudders* If this story isn't scary as f*ck, then I don't know what is! After reading this yesterday I almost couldn't sleep! *shudders again*
And, like Wolf, I'd like to get a gun and shoot that bastard to William Hayes myself! He really is insane!
So, all in all, another incredibly well written chapter... And that's what I hate about it! It's so well written that you can't let it go... but you wish you could cause it's so damn scary... if you know what I mean. At least this was supposed to be a compliment *LOL*
*sits in her corner to wait for the next scary chapter*
And, like Wolf, I'd like to get a gun and shoot that bastard to William Hayes myself! He really is insane!
So, all in all, another incredibly well written chapter... And that's what I hate about it! It's so well written that you can't let it go... but you wish you could cause it's so damn scary... if you know what I mean. At least this was supposed to be a compliment *LOL*
*sits in her corner to wait for the next scary chapter*
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April 30, 2003 at 12:00 AM
*Thromps around the room.* Give me a gun and I'll shoot the...Okay, I'll be nice. You guys have created a bad guy that you just love to hate, and I hope he gets what he deserves by the end of this. It's always fun to see Darren startled, at least for me because it isn't usually an emotion that we really get to see from him. *Patiently awaits more...*