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for The Pit

by Foraoo

schedule August 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh that wasjust too supreamly decident! Just what I was looking for! Thank you for writing this preciouse little jewel of a fic!

NEVER STOP WRITING,

Aden Diction
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person Aden
schedule December 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
O.O That was......orgasmic (no pun intended). Verry Errotic, verry well done, nicely worded, great imagry, verry sexy. I don't think I can thik of anthing elso to say. O.O never stop writting

Aden
person LindaG
schedule March 2, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I see you finally finished this. It is dark. Beautiful, but dark. I feel so bad for Darren. What a terrible life.
Great job, though.
person Leggy
schedule March 2, 2003 at 12:00 AM
That was great as alwayz! loooooved the story!
person Zippy
schedule March 2, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Intense and gripping. An unusually dark slash story and a lead character with very dirty habits!.Brilliant!