rate_review Reviews

Hi! I really enjoyed your story and portrayal of Phelps. You really emcompassed his personality to me. I feel like he would be a smartass where certain things are concerned. Like you, I wish there were more stories about him. I am planning on actually starting one myself.
Cheers,
Breakablebeings

You didn't have to add that disclaimer at the end...who cares--it was your fantasy and it was AWESOME!!!!

I really liked it. The imagery was...*cough* lovely. I could just see him pushing himself out of the pool...dripping...hmmmm...*blinks* Anyway, you HAVE to write a sequel, you just HAVE to.

B.A.D

P.S: Thank you for making me into a Phelps fan! ^_^

I really liked this! ARe you gonna do some more chapters? you should as i also love michael phelps! carry on!

Thank you!!! Thank you!! I was so hoping someone would write about him and you most definitely captured all of the things that are appealing about him. Feel free to write more :)

Hi everyone. I just wanted to say thanks for the reviews (yes, even the person who called me a creepy stalker, I respect your opinion despite the fact that I don't share it). Anyway, I was a bit afraid that the story would come off as creepy (as I am with some of the other stories I write), but the truth is that I wanted to reflect upon the awkward teenage girl who has the crush on the impossibly unattainable guy, but manages to win him over anyway ("Sixteen Candles" was a favorite movie of mine for awhile). I understand how people would find it weird that I put myself in the story, or someone a lot like me. I've found that a lot of my best writing came from personal experiences. I actually did date a swimmer awhile back and used the experiences with him to model this story, but featuring Michael Phelps instead. I'm sorry if I offended anybody, but I just went off of a fantasy. Isn't that what adult fanfiction is about anyway? Fantasies are obviously not real. The odds of me meeting Michael Phelps and boinking him are about as slim as Orlando Bloom having anal sex with Viggo Mortenson.

i liked it!! thats the first one ive read too. im trying to write one right now... anyhow great job!!
~Evie

Real people are not your sex toys. Perhaps you shouldn't be publishing your sex fantasies about someone else to the Internet. For one thing, it's creepy in a stalker-ish way. Two, your personal fantasies are only erotic to yourself. No one else really cares about your living vicariously through fic.

Hi there!!
Really liked your story!! Very well written!! :-)

More or another one, please!! ;-)

Greets,
Danielle :-)