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June 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ahhhhhh! You just had to end there!!!! Update soon! I reallllllllllllyyyyyyyy wanna know whats gonna happen with karen and Orli!!
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June 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
GREAT FIC! I can't believe Eve got shot! What horrible timeing. I started cracking up when Karen said "Okiday". I swear I say that 50 times a day.( I got it from Jar Jar Binks on 'Star Wars: Episode II'.) P.S.: You should really think about checking your spelling after each chapter. You're confusin' the hell out of us, man!
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May 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is a really good story,I like it! So much to happen to one young woman. Laina is an exceptional young woman, so strong to be only 18. I look forward to reading more of this wonderful story. Update soon,please?
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May 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I really love this story!!! Are you writting more??...Oh please write more! *getting sad* *starts to sob*If you don't,*sob*............How will anyone know the end?! *sob* I'll die if I don't know the end! I'm feeling kind of sick NOW; if you hurry you can save me!!
Ok, so.....maybe I'm not dieing but....I MUST KNOW THE ENDING OF THIS STORY. Please keep writting....PLEASE!!
Ps: I'm not insane but I need some way of drawing attention to myself. Plus...if I want you to write another chaper you have to know;right? I hope this got your attention. Did it???
Ok, so.....maybe I'm not dieing but....I MUST KNOW THE ENDING OF THIS STORY. Please keep writting....PLEASE!!
Ps: I'm not insane but I need some way of drawing attention to myself. Plus...if I want you to write another chaper you have to know;right? I hope this got your attention. Did it???
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March 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
update soon!! i love it !!!
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March 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i like this alot!!! please update soon!!! at least your story isnt all about orlando being inlove with a guy , gosh they have so many of those , it makes me sick , well i like rthis story!! update soon!!! ^_^
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March 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Your story is really good....but you made this last chapter too short....it left me, and other readers, hanging with unanwserd questions. One of my questions is, will Orlando and Karen truely fall in love. That's kind of an expected thing to have happen.....but it will leave me, and many other fangirls, jealous.
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January 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMG OMG!!! YOU CANNOT STOP THERE!!
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September 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
and? What happens next? don't leave me hanging!!! That was a great story so far and i'm interested to see where that's headed. Cheers.
~Sandra~
~Sandra~
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September 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Okay, now that cliffy was just damn CRUEL...your hear me? CRUEL!!! Gah....wel you better update like with in the next few hours...er...days. If not...well, i will die of suspense! UPDATE!
Faelwen
Faelwen