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person Seisen
schedule January 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
this is sooooooo saaaaaaaad TT_TT I read it like twice, and i loved it....you MUST continue though, leaving this like that TT_TT..poor kyo..
poor kaoru..
poor them..
TT_TT
person Cassie
schedule September 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh no please don't leave it there! The story is so well written and put together! You said there would be more if people reviewed and I'm reviewing! Kyo and Kaoru have hit and missed a couple a times well now they have to try and hit the target so to speak pleassssssseeeeeeeeeee! I like your story so much I hope you continue it cause right now it seems so sad and they are both missing out on love! I hope to read lots more soon!^_-
person Saki
schedule June 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
omg... even though it was so sad (close to tears, yeah right) I still realy liked it. It was the perspective I liked from it and it had a nice closed ending. Not open ended, like so many have. And the way you described Kaoru's then bf being drunk and raping him? Very nice *shakes hands in front of her, eyes wide* not it a sexy way!! Just how you wrote it!! Anyways, I just wanted to say, good job.
person Bambi
schedule April 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*sniff*

i was nearly crying sometimes ...

please write on !!!


~Bam~
person DanSan
schedule December 7, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Kaoru and Kyo must end up in a soring yet loving fucking session, ok?
It's not for anything that this is "adult"fanfiction.net.
Keep on!!! I want more, it's enticing :P
person Rowan
schedule September 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Absolutely brilliant. It's so sad!!!! ;_; Awwwwww Poor KaoKaois there another addition? please say yes!!!!!!!!!!!
person Lure
schedule September 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This is good! I absolutely love the pairing! ^^ (sry....long time fav....) and the cutting thing (yea.....I'm a sadist...... please don't mind...) please update soon! i want to know what happens!
person Solo
schedule September 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Nyah! Its so sad.....-glomps Kyo- I love it so far...I'ma waiting for more, so hurry! XD -sounds rude-........errrhhh.......Hurry....please?