rate_review Reviews

Your fic is awesome! I thought it would be... Unrealistic, when I finished reading though, I knew it was anything but unrealistic. Nicely done. You made me laugh on so many occasions and I hope you keep at it, and make Marshall more nervous, I think it's cute too. :p I hope you update soon! :D you're doing a great job so far. Oh and me and my friend wanna know: does B-rabbit stand for Bunny Rabbit? I THINK thats it. But then again I might have missed some part of 8 mile where they said it. Have you actually watched the movie? I think it's a bit too dramatic, but good nonetheless :D

Wuv,
Miss Hunny Bunny

^^ yes it means Bunny Rabbit. In the movie, there are 2 explanations:

1. from Future (not a direct quote): because he's fast and he fucks a lot
2. from Stephanie (his mom): he had big ears, buck teeth.

and line? give us an update, will ya? ;)

uh... update? please???

Great Fic keep going.One off the best eminem fics every

What?
O my god this is so gay that its.
good.

OMG! O.O Nick-Sexual was PRICELESS, TOTALLY CLASSICIAL! Lol, also get Mar to give Nick another pet name^^ Hehe, I this was an "Unexpected" pairing! lol, BUT I LOVE IT! So much humor. HEY, when they have sex, who's going to be on top?! OR BOTH *Falls and drools all over the place* YOU ARE LORD AND MASTER! Plus you inspired me to right a song with this line:My pulse is racing and my hands are shaking.. THANKS ALOT FOR THAT! If you want, you can become one of my offcial muses? PLEASE ^_^ I haven't been inspired in months like that, byes! *Waves*

I know this is the characters speaking, but you probably could do with toning down the overuse of colloquialism. Chapter nine is much better written, than say, chapter two.

Other than that, I really have to say, this is an excellant story. You get into character and gauge reactions quite well.

That's all.

ummm, nothing. I'm just being my stalker self and placing a review here, too. ;)

so, when's that update coming, line? i'm having withdrawal symptoms here. *g*

God, no! Why isn't there sex?! I understand that you want them to take it slow, but WHAT ABOUT THE SEX?! SEEEEX!!!

...

Anyway, I'm so glad you updated. "And now for something completly different." Ironically, I just watched MP's "The Life of Brian" at my boyfriend's apartment. "Everyone, do as the Messiah and take off one shoe!" "No no no, the shoe is a symbol!" Ah, good times. Yeah, my boyfriend has an obsession with Monty Python and Mystery Science Theatre 3000. He has the box sets to both. And, to add to his oddness, he had more Marilyn Manson stuff than anyone could think possible. He has, litterally, 120 Manson CDs, including imported ones from Japan with bonus tracks and crap. And every square inch of his room is covered in pictures of Manson. That's hundreds. I love him anyway, though. But the point of this rant is this: Either Nick of Marshall should have some weird obsession that doesn't fit with their personality. Something you wouldn't expect, like a voodoo shrine in a closet.

...Yeah, I havn't had sex in a few days (period, godammit!), and I'm kinda in a weird PMS horomone driven funk. Please forgive me.

Mmmm...!!! It was worth it!!!! Thank you!!!
Do you plan a "happy end"? :)