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for Unexpected

by Line

person lesley
schedule March 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
an update!!! woohoo! dance of joy! finally. i've been talking to myself for weeks wondering what'll happen. i almost got committed to some asylum. lol! aight, not really. but close. *g*

lovey lots this chapter as usual. marshall's one confused cutie, still a sweetie tho (interlaced hands! i almost died!) and nick's all panicky again and i love it. the 8 mile interchange left me with a smile for minutes. maybe even HOURS. almost had a lockjaw there. hee!

update soon, okay?

and btw, i been a fan of em's since 99, i was reading through your comments and i would just want you to know that your em aint ooc at all. i think you got him almost perfect. your em's the em you read/watch on his interviews and hear on his personal songs. believe me, i know an ooc em when i see one and yours is certainly not one of them. you read that story 'sweet fucking ass'? now that's an ooc. it's still hot though. ;)

anyway, good job line. i repeat: update soon!!!
person Herald Soucree
schedule March 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Nick-sexual. Wow. Okay, that works. Heh, the butterfly line had me thinking about a RPS fic I'm doing for Marilyn Manson, of all people. It's about a rookie cop named David who gets stuck working as security for a Manson concert, and after the concert ends up walking in on Marilyn masturbating. Oh corse, this leads to much guy lovin', but the first line of the fic happens to be, "David McGregor felt like carnivorous butterflies had taken up residence in his stomach." If you like, you can borrow the carnivorous butterfly line too, since you liked my fake phone conversation from earlier so much. :) Anyway, update soon, 'cause I was really hoping for guy sex in the last chapter. *sniff*
person ice
schedule February 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
... und jetzt muss ich schon wieder warten aufs naechsten Chapter...,
aber es lohnt sich!!! Ist es sehr schwer Marshal nicht zu sehr OOC zu machen?
person Aviona
schedule February 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Sorry, I'm late. I'm so happy to see an update of 2 chapters, I'm in-love with this story. I agree with everyone's reviews, that 'Nick-sexual' quip got me, too. Marshall's so sweet no wonder Nick's in-love. I can't wait to see how they'll be spending their 1st weekend together.

Hope there'll be another update soon.
person cole
schedule February 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i love this story. 2 very pretty blonds hooking up. definitely gets me hot and bothered. lmao! pls update soon.
person lesley
schedule February 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
yay! 2 chappies! all is happy in emslash world again.

i love their conversation. nick is all fidgety and being honest like he's drunk (i dunno, i'm like that when i'm drunk. thoughts that's supposed to be just in my head slip out. dang!). and marshall? he really knows how to swept a man off his feet, don't he? hooray for nick-sexuals! they so cute i wanna kill them. ::lol::

i'm dying in anticipation for part II.
person Tetra
schedule February 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was quick! Thank you so much for the speedy update. You delivered, as promised, and it's good. Damn, it's good. So, when's part 2 coming? *g*

This new chapter is so charming. I'm squeeing like I'm 12. Nick and Marsh are so cuddly and adorable. I love how they have this doubts in their head, fighting with themselves and would just go with what their impulse leads them to. It's great.

Nick-sexual! If somebody would tell me something anywhere near those words, I'd be their slave for life. ;)

As for Marshall's promise on the previous chapter, did he bring along a suit with him? I so agree with Nick on that one. Em would look good in a suit. (and in drag *g*)
person Nishia
schedule January 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wooo Hooo. I can hardly wait for "The weekend" now. The anticipation is going to kill me.
person Funny! Aissa :)
schedule January 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wooo! Quickie update!!! *dances like a chicken*

I have this big silly smile the whole time I was reading this. He's staying over at Nick's! Oh God, I'm so worried that Marshie'll be a bitch and stay at a hotel because *in a whiny voice* 'I'm not ready to take the next step yet'.

They're so adorable having this argument with themselves. The silly, nervous descriptions. I love it!

"My butterflies have butterflies"

So cute!

and, and...

"He’s quiet. He’s very quiet and it’s very disconcerting. Mommy? I’m scared!"

ROTFLMAO!!!

As for this one,

"I’m not gay, I’m not bi, I am however fucking turned on by you. I think I’m Nick-sexual."

and this?

"And I’m not just in it for the sex."

*dies* I'm in love!!!

More please! and soon! *wuvs you*

BTW, please tell Nick to change Marshie's mind about the assfucking thing? Smack Marshall upside the head and make him realize that he's such a nelly bottom. *g*
person Tetra
schedule January 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
"but is it okay if I promise to not make you wait as long for the next chapter?"

Yes! That perfectly okay with me. Thank you. *grin*

I feel like joining Nick on the fun and jump up and down on the bed with him. Seriously, can they be any cuter? I love you for this update.

I'm patiently waiting for the next. *gets comfortable and drinks piña coladas*