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by Line

person Aissa
schedule January 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*lol* Tetra! Y'know, I feel like joining Nick with the jumping on the bed thingie, too. OMG, I'm imagining Nick jumping on his bed when all of a sudden 2 complete strangers jumps along with him. *lol*

Line, OMG, an update! sooo happy. Nick is so funny. I love your Nick to pieces. I want to pet him and tell him that it's gonna be alright. Marshie will understand the slip-ups, he's loving it, you see. He's as nervous as you are.

Yay! Love him!!! and Marshall's flying over! I think I'm having a hard time understanding myself now. I'm just too happy for words. Thanks for finally updating. I hope the next one will be here soon.

And yes, Nick, he so does smile. There are lots of pictures to prove. And he has the cutesiest dimples ever. You'll die, I'm sure. Blinded by the prettiness ;)
person Herald Soucree
schedule January 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Some how, I imagined the next chapter going like this:

Brian: *picking up phone* Hello?
Marshall: Um, hi. Is Nick around?
Brain: Yeah, who is this?
Marshall: Uh... *long pause* ...fuck.
Brian: Uh huh. Lemme go get him. *yelling louding across the room* HEY NICK! "UH, FUCK!" CALLED FOR YOU!! SHOULD I TELL HIM TO GO "UH, FUCK" HIMSELF?
Nick: *squeals* Gimme the phone!
person Tetra
schedule January 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Line, you owe us a super duper longish bible-length chapter for making us wait this long. ::lmao::sticks out tongue::runs off giggling like I'm 12::
person Kouichi Pendolse
schedule January 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love this fic. So sexy. I really think Em should be such a little bitch. -^.^-
person Aloisha
schedule January 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
http://www.livejournal.com/community/emslash

1. Check out the pics on the first post.^^

I hope that gets the muses kicking.

2. Update!

I love this story. You're a good writer. I hope there'll be more soon.
person Dame J
schedule January 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
EVIL!!!!!!!!!! soooo evilll..... come on ... gibe me more.....
person Aissa
schedule January 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
A couple more days left and it'll be your 1 month anniversary of not updating. *pouts*
person Avon
schedule January 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh my goodness. this is brilliant! Please continue!
person Aissa
schedule December 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Merry Christmas, Line! An update for christmas? huh? please? I love presents. *g*
person Aviona
schedule December 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
You did it again! Once again, you left me craving for more. ;)

On every chapter you always have these lines that will have me LOLing like crazy. This last chapter, this line had me rolling:
"That’s what I thought, until he practically molested me in an alley."

LOL! I love it. More!