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PHWOOOOAAAARRRR!!!! That was HOT. Marshall is just soooooo sexy when he's angsty but too horny to stop. I am sooooooooo looking forward to the next part. Will he say f**k it and call Nick straight away (getting a hot phone sex vizzy now) or will he tough it out for a while until he's so desperate he'll let Nick do anything he wants? OMG! *dies*

Line, where's our update? I'm pouting here. Please update soon. Think of it as our thanksgiving present. :)

t's been too long since good Em slash came along. It's great that I discovered this. This is just what I've been looking for. I hope you update soon because that was too abrupt. Just when we're getting to the good stuff you just had to end it there. You're EVIL.

"his irises which used to resemble the sky on a clear summer day, have gone dark like the ocean when a storm is moving in."

I love that line. Very vivid and poetic.

BTW, I think AFF messed up parts of your story, you may want to check on the spelling and stuff. (e.g. "the first tentative taste of his tbingbing flesh")

dude you better fucking update soon!!! its really good lol i never really thought about Nick and Em but its a good match lol...i never really knew Nick was taller then him either lol

So glad you're still writing this. It's way too hot to quit now. I wanna know every little detail about everything they get up to. I just love when Marshall is a male/male virgin, so many firsts. First time giving , fi, first time f***ing another guy, first time being f***ed, yet tet the picture. Ooooohhhhh, kink is good too (hint hint). I'm rather partial to Marshall in a dress.

Anyway, really looking forward to the next part. Hope it won't be too long coming.

I always thought that Nick Carter paired with Eminem would be a cute one. They both have this baby faces . They'd have chemistry and this story proves me right.

I hope you update soon. It'll be almost a month since the last update. It'll be such a waste to not continue this, especially when things are starting to heat up. You just can't stop, Line. You can't. You've given us a taste of your talent, and now we want more. :)

P.S.
I find this d, id, is Eminem 8 yearser ter than Nick? Maybe he lied because he looks so much younger. I honestly even think that he looks younger than Nick, and I'm a BSB fan. It's a conspiracy

Gotta luv Em slash!! YaYa!! It's even better when you add the lovely blond Back Street bitch, as you so eloquently put it!! ^^ Please update soon, for the GraY?! t'll love you forever!

Yay for new emslash fic!

Mmm I like the little details you add, like Nick being able to smell him up close. I also liked the funny banter with Nick accusing him of thinking he came all the way to Detroit just for him. Silly musician boys with their bruised egos! ;P

I 2nd Benzoyl's wish for Em being topped... it's just a great world of angsty confusion waiting to happen. :)

Me be looking forward to more.

AWSOME...you stopped to soon. Sniff sniff more soon!

Oh new fic! Carter? hmmmm... I think I can live with that. Why isn't anyone writing more Em/Proof?! *cries*

Anyways, Carter. Pretty, blond AND conniving! Woohoo!!! He's in Detroit. Why? Marshall would be like, 'What are you doing here Carter?' and he'd be like, 'Oh I was in the neighborhood'. Goddamn right, he is. I wanm tom to top Em, teach him about the birds and the bees. hee!

Please. Do continue. :)