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for Last Swim

by jai

person SolarCat
schedule July 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Okay, I usually don't review until I'm done with a fic, but I love you for putting the Rattlesnake Club in it. Isn't their food just to die for? :) Darn it, now I'm hungry.... but still, it's nice to see the authenticity in this fic, location-wise. I'm from Ann Arbor, so I know the area (and would guess that you live, or have lived, at least nearby), and I'm pleased with the portrayal. And that you included the Rattlesnake Club. Very good "first date", that... ^-^

~*SC
person nulinka
schedule October 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
you're great. so much done in so short time. con gratulation :) ::)
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i hope you will write now something new :) because this was/is veeeeeeeery good.
person chibi
schedule October 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
AWWWW I LOVE THIS STORY ^^
it too cute ^^
i cant wait for the next part (: