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for The Sweet Life

by jai

person Bitter_sweet
schedule April 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
It was an absolute pleasure to read this fic. I'm sorry to see the story end, but I like the way you wrapped it up. Six boys!!! Incredible.
person Jessica
schedule April 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
What a great story, more drama and more suspence, a truly wonderful job.
person stacy
schedule April 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Jai, I am so sad to see this story end. I loved it! I can't wait for the continuation of the Michael/Ian saga!!

-Stacy :)
person Ashleigh
schedule April 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I'm totally sad to see this end, but even more excited for the Pieter/Grant to carry on because I love those two. LOVE THOSE TWO. i've never been able to write them convincingly. Anyway. I'm amused at their six sons and hopefully we'll get to spend time with the new additions in the future. And also, do I sense an eighth child in their future? *dies* God, I can see Ian and his brood with Pieter and Grant's child in tow. And also the line about Pieter and Grant having to get married was classic. Oh, I can gush all day. I feel like I'm losing a close friend with the close of this story.
person Eve
schedule April 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Thanks so much for an awesome story. I look forward to reading Diplomatic Relations. You're an amazing author. Anyway, keep up the good work.
person Fishy
schedule April 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You've just made my day - TWO chapters after that wait! I can't get onto Olympia any more, but at least you're posting here too. Can't wait for more Pieter and Grant.
person Jamie
schedule April 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Aw. So cute. I will miss this, but I love Grant and Pieter, too! And the next Thorpe/Phelps episode will give me something to look forward to. :D

Thanks so much for updating. I was going into major withdrawl with the reloading-the-page-every-5-minutes-to-see-if-you-updated symptom. But this was more than worth the wait! Now the waiting for DR starts... ;)
person Ashleigh
schedule March 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Dear God in heaven, I am SO glad I found this. Really. I was starting to spaz out. *wipes brow* For some reason I'm now seeing Ian as Maria to Michael's Baron von Trapp. *snort*
person Fishy
schedule March 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I've been waiting what feels like forever for this update...and it was worth the wait! Great smut, and more interesting story developments.
person Jamie
schedule March 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Thank god for AFF! I needed my SL fix. :)

Ian and Michael are officially crazy. Ten kids?!?!?!? Cute, but psycho. ;) I can't even imagine dealing with five. Anyway, I absolutely loved this chapter. Ian's financial talk fetish was hilarious. Mikey was adorable as always. And I adored Grant's cameo. Thanks for posting!