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for Bless Me Father

by MyBloodItches

person EpitomeofaReject
schedule November 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hrm...So tempted. *Goes back, crosses off 'Chris' and puts Jespree* Muwahahaha. Haha. Haaaa...I'm a moment ruiner just like Chris. Like my boyfriend will be liring next to me in bed, and he'll be like 'I love you...' and I'll just say 'Go get a tic tac before you say that crap all in my face.' I'm so nice.

Tre Cool so far. Not as in the hot drummer from GD, either. But, yesh, I loves it so. No complaints. Dammit, I'm going soft. But this very much fits the mental image in my head. Joel the innocent and Billeh teh Goth. Hot. And AU. Mmm...Hot, A/U Billy....

Erm. Anyways, yes. Update soon....Or else?
person MrsMonaghanBoyd
schedule November 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
OH MY GOD!!!!!!! OH MY GOD! OH MY GOD! THIS IS SOOO GOOD! YOU MUST UPDATE! QUICK! I LOVE YOUR WRITING STYLE AND I LOVE THE STORY!
person EpitomeofaReject
schedule November 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
*Gasps* I wanna come inside and hang out! Pick me! Pick me! DAMMIT, if he doesn't wanna come, I'll sufface! I have money, I'll buy your crack or whatever for you! Please?! PLEASE?!

Woah. Sorry there. I forgot to take my meds. >> << AAANYWAYS. Hi Hi. *Waves* Omfg. I love this so far. Billy + Joel = Sweet Love Factory with Big Family. Long story. I have to write a slash fic soon. After I finish MDP, I'm supposed to post my GC story, based on a whole bunch of RPs between me and my best friend persona.

Good job. No bad comments. I can really suit this to Billy and Joel's personalities. Joel's so innocent, and Billy's so....Not. lmfao. Boyshorts molestation - Another long story. Anyways, update soon. Vedy soon. Or I shall throw something pointy at someone. And chaos will ensue...
person EpitomeofaReject
schedule November 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Dammit. It cut my review again. I went on a ranting session about it's perfection, portrayal to character and junk. But there was two good inside jokes in it. The boyshort molestation, and Billy + Joel = Sweet Love Factory with Big Family, but they weren't that important.

And a rant about my stories and stuff. I'm planning on posting a GC story after MDP. If My writers' block ever dies. ><

Update soon. Or I will throw something sharp, and that will be vedy, vedy not good. *Maniacal laughter*
person EpitomeofaReject
schedule November 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This is hot so far. Vedy, vedy hot. And nothing even happened yet. *Sighs* I'm a hopeless case. A vedy hopeless case.

Again, a VERY good chappie. Much Billy/Joel cute-ness. I could so imagine Billy, Paul and Chris being crackheads. *Giggle fit* It just seems so realiztic to me! One thing, though. I know you probably know this, and I'm not trying to sound like a pissed teenteeni, but before anyone screams at you, keep in mind that the guys didn't grow up with Chris. Unless this is A/U, and like, everything is altered. Yeah, I think that's it, so nevermind that.

BNYWANYWAYS! Great chappie. UpdatB soB soon, or else. Again, I will be mad. And you won't like me when I'm mad. Rawr. >D
person Rurouni agra
schedule November 8, 2004 at 12:00 AM
lol, just a LOT wierd, why the hell do you think im enjoying this so much? OK, so now i can s ths that the unnamed speaker is Billy, unless this is AU and its Benji or something like that, which would be wierd, but then again, im not one to talk, i make Billy skitzo :D PLEASE KEEP WRITING, screw those people who don't review, I know i certainly dont normally and i owe like 6 people reviews *bows head in shame* however, if you stop this i might just kill you, so don't. I'm rambling and hyper...i think im gonna go now, perhaps my own story might get a new chapter...he, yea right....sorry about the bad grammer...like i said hyper....love your stuff, keep it up, much love, and I'll be checking reguarly for you <3
person Rurouni agra
schedule November 8, 2004 at 12:00 AM
lol, im such a moron...i didnt read the thing at the very top of the story, gods i feel dumb, forgive me? *blushes and runs away*
person EpitomeofaReject
schedule November 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM
You started off really well. Mmmm...Billy/Joel. My favortire pairing. *Maniacal laughter* *Pauses* Woah. That was very, very awkward.

You may want to change/add on to the description, because at first, I thought this was gonna be like a story that AEMorgan wrote, so, yeah. You might wanna change it a little. But you better update this AND Tony Loves Benji soon. Or else I'll throw something pointy at somebody. >>; And that would be very, very not good.
person Agra
schedule November 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
um...alright....cool. I certainly hope you're going somewhere with this. One because if your not im going to kill you. Tow because you have a great writing style and if you stop im going to kill you. And Three because i want to see which GC member the narrator was.





BTW, I wouldnt really kill you, but do you really want to see me cry?