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by Yakkorat

person butabara
schedule June 18, 2010 at 12:00 AM
This... was NOT awful... I need a VERY cold shower... very very soon. O.O *shivers* Wow.

Well done.
person Linwe
schedule December 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Nah...didn't come across as stereo instructions. LOL. Detailed...it was very detailed & for someone who hasn't written het in a while, it was done quite excellently! Not to mention, I love how you still incorporated Orli & Viggo's simple touches to convey their emotions for each other. Did I mention it was hot?*fans face* Oh yeah..it was still one of the hottest threesomes I've read!
person Countess
schedule December 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hey there! I thought this was awesome. I was in the mood for some RPS and stumbled onto this one. I can't believe how wonderful your vocabulary and writing is. Bravo!!
person Angel
schedule December 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Awful?! How can you call that awful? It puts MY stuff to shame! (even though my stuff really isn't that good... screenname is "jonniebean" if you want to see mine.) This was one of the best threesomes I've read. Keep up the good work! :) If it can get me in the mood for MY man, then it is definitely good! ;)

-- Angel