rate_review Reviews

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This is a good story. I like the plot line. There is something that is annoying me about it. word of a advice, get a BETA, or do check it yourself for spelling mistakes and words that are mixed up. There isn't a lot of them but some words are wrong. just a few though.

Anyways, it's a great story. Keep updating please!!!

Good, but isn't there going to be any more?

wow that is sooooooooooooooooooooooo gud please write more chapters.

I love this story! I want to see what happens! Please hurry and update!!!!

Mmm...A/U Joel/Billy. I mean, hi. *Smacks self* How rude of me. I'm Jespree. =D And you are one of two of my idols on AFF.

Great story so far. And yes, I have obsessed much. Every story you write, I check on. And I know. *Slaps wrist* I should review. I'm a bad, bad person, but this is to make up for lost times. So yeah.

Great plot so far. If I'm guessing correctly, this is going to be a damned great story like your other ones. Billy + Joel = Sweet Love Factory with Big Family. And yeah. Good job. Update soon.

Hurry up and carry on! Liking it so far!

Don't stop now! *begs*

Yay for orignial ideas! I have no idea why, but that made me smile....I've been through that and its not fun. Please keep writing this ASAP. For once no twincest, theres too much of it out there right now, thanks. Sorry this is short, but I promise I'll write more next time.