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for The War (In The Beginning)

by pensfan100

person AhaydenS
schedule July 15, 2020 at 12:00 AM

Wow. Just wow. I was watching some Anidala vids on YouTube when I saw in the comments where someone said that Hayden and Natalie would have made a great couple. Naturally, I Googled for fanfics and this is one of the top results - and I can see why; I created a log-in just so I can say how good it is. How long before she says she loves him? Does she break up with Michael? I really hope you come back to this story!

person randomangel22
schedule January 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
please update soon!!!!!!! i love this story and a oh-so-dark hayden!!!!!! i can't to find out what move he's going to make to win natalie. hurry please!!!!
person Anon
schedule January 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Amazing story. I'd love to read more. Please update
person akemi
schedule December 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i really love your story so far - i hope you update soon!
person cowtossing
schedule December 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
What a spectacular read! I don't usually go for this couple but it was so beautifully written, including the very descriptive sexual scenes; very enjoyable ;)

I cannot wait to see more additions to a such a piece of work!!!
person Anon
schedule October 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaah ! please update !!
person Hayde&NatLuver119
schedule October 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
omg damn this is so hot! Please update!
person amyamy42
schedule October 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
omg!!!! more!!! please!!! this is a great story!!! please continue as soon as you can!!!!!!!!
person T-BONE
schedule October 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OH DAMN THAT WAS HOTT !!! CONTINUE !! PLEASE !!
person T-BONE
schedule October 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
THANK YOU SO MUCH FOR UPDATING !!! I can't say anything else but... PERFECT !! it would be even more perfect if you would update YSCCD !!