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for The War (In The Beginning)

by pensfan100

person Stag
schedule October 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Loving the build up to the confession. It's really hot. Well, maybe its cuz Hayden is hot. Hm...
person Stag
schedule October 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
AN UPDATE! *tears* It's been a long time!MORE!...please
person Caz
schedule October 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hells Bells, Bonnie, I DARE you to get the next chapter even better than that one. Superb!
person ilovestarwars220
schedule October 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
omg!!! it's been about a week since i've read ALL your stories!! They are all so perfect and wonderful and.. words can't explain about how much of a great writer you are!!!! Please update soon, i would REALLY love to read more!!
person ME
schedule October 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love it so much!! Thank you for updating!! Please update soon!! PLEASE!!
person T-BONE
schedule September 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
THANK YOU THANK YOU THANK YOU THANK YOU THANK YOU THANK YOU THANK YOU !! SO MUCH !! PERFECT CHAPTER !! PLEASE CONTINUE AS SOON AS POSSIBLE !! YOU ARE MY HERO !!
person valerie
schedule September 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Brilliant! Absolutely brilliant.

I adore your writing so very much. This story is really great. And I am so very happy that you have updated.

Can't wait for more. ;)
person Caz
schedule September 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ah, welcome back, Bonnie. So good to read another chapter from you. I was beginning to forget what a master you are at it. Hope to read more soon. Thanks :D
person Caz
schedule September 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
oh, maaaaaaaaaaaan! I can't belieev you've updated and I can't read it for about another 4 hours!!!!!!! Damn!!
Can't wait, though :D
person michelle
schedule September 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hey! you updated. I can't wait to read the end of this story. I hate the girl hayden when out with...what's her name desiress or something. I can't wait for you to update. I love and enjoy your stories very much.