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April 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hooboy! I need a cold shower! That was so hot. Who knew Natalie had it in her? (no pun intended) :P Awesome chapter, Pensfan. I can't wait to see what Hayden has in store for Nat. The angst, the drama.....the hot sex! LOL You are definitely one of the best erotic fiction writers I've come across online. I wish I could write sex the way you do. Any chance you'll write a Vader/Padme fic in the future? I'd love to read what you'd do with those two particular characters.
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April 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yay, another chapter! Of course, now you've left us hanging to see how Natalie will get her revenge. Loving this story - please update soon!
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April 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
WHOA!!! Awesome chapter. I can't wait to see where it goes from here. It's so dark and boardering on scary but it's still HOT! Thanks!!
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April 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
hehe, "Heaven"... I swear, when they casted Jude Law as her love interest in Closer, I could not help but think how right she looked with curly haired, blonde males with dark blue eyes... But she looks best with Hayden. Seriously, Jude Law is hot but Natalie is reserved for Hayden. :)
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April 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh, Man!! Can't wait for payback day!! LOLOL! Good to see another fabulous chapter of this Bonnie. Superb piece of action :D
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April 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
It is quite about time you update this! I cannot wait for the second part. I love this story, one of your greatest if I do say so myself. Hurry with the second part, please...
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March 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Sorry this is taking so long. I am halfway through the next chapter but Real Life has interfered! Please hang on and I'll try and get it done. If I'm not interrupted and called out to work tomorrow I just may have it finished before midnight tomorrow night. I apologize profusely! I hate it when I get left hanging and I am sure that is how all of you are feeling right about now.
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March 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wee! Update please! :)
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March 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Okay. I've just read this fic over again for the tenth time.....at least! I really need an update. This fic is too good to let it die. So when can we expect an update? Hayden and Natalie have been in that shower for ages. LOL
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March 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Thankyou for the reply, Bonnie. I seriously can't wait for the next chapter! When will you put it up? Hopefully soon. Is there any way that you could email me the chapters that you do have done of "You still can't control Destiny" ? Anyway, thankyou for all the stories you do write. They are amazing...