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This is very good, but you know that I have loved it so far. I think you are starting to rush it a little bit, though. I feel it's like after chapter six Hayden has gone soft. Bring the bad boy back. He's so hot as the bad boy, I swear... Anyhow, update! I would love you forever and ever if you posted the sequel to You still can't control destiny!! PLEASE!! Or at least give a link in the next chapter to it, or something. Everyone would love that story so much. I love the game they were playing in that story. He says something about that it won't be a problem because she got herself a canadian... Hehe... Loved it!

Ali, I promise Hayden is not going to go soft. In fact, in the next chapter Bad Hayden is back and he is going to take matters into his own hands when he gets ticked off about something. However, she is going to give it right back to him later and while he won't go soft, he will enjoy every agonizing moment. As for You Still Can't Control Destiny...I never finished it and if I post it others will be after me to finish it! And I will feel really bad that it may be a long time before I get back to it!

Now that, is S.E.X. in the best use of the word. Superb chapter, Bonnie. You truly are the master at writing these scenario's. Eager for the next bit - but not so long though, please!!! you kill me with the waiting :D
p.s. Thank you sooo much for the reviews on mine. You have no idea how much they meant to me :D

YAY!! Thank you so much for the update. I could use a cold shower myself now!

Bonnie, I hate it when you make me complain. This story has to be updated again, okay???!?!?!!? I'm going through withdrawl symtons. It's horrible. There aew some stories you have uncompleted but this story, you can't just leave it like this. It's captivated me. PKEASE update it????

Yes! Chuffed to bits to find another chapter. And what a chapter. Sheesh! Love all the heated tension. I can't wait for 'tomorrow' either :D

I absoulutely love this story. I really do. You really have to update this more often. You also should post the sequel to You can't control destiny. Now that is a hot story, the whole them playing a game and him leaving his own bachelor party. Love that story. Hell, I love all of your stories. Please update soon!

YAY!!! An update. Thank you, thank you.
Your writing didnt seem rusty to me.

Um....Wow! If that's how good you are when rusty I can't wait to see what you write when you're on a roll. LOL I wouldn't change a thing about this chapter. It was really hot. I adore how you write Hayden. He's so confident. He smolders. *drool* Natalie doesn't stand a chance, poor girl.

I am DESPERATELY waiting for tomorrow!!!