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January 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Why the HELL haven't you updated this story?!?!?!? It needs to be updated. I don't think rhat you quite understand that. Really. It's my opinion that trouble should come up for them such as NAtalie not wanting to break up with her boyfriend and Hayden being a little less than happy about it. And, well, I know that you know here you could take it from there. Please update this! I am BEGGING you!!
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January 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
please update? pretty please?
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December 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This is such a good story! It's unbelieavably hot, good characterisation, good dialogue, amazing descriptions. Please continue, I can't wait for thze next chapter!
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December 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Your stories are brilliant. Please update!!
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December 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
SOOOOOOOOOOO GOOOOOOOOOOOD!!!! Thanks so much for the update!! i will endevor to be patient while waiting for the next one.
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December 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oh yes! Great ending to this one. Nothing like a bit of blunt talking to ram things home. Great stuff. Already eager for next chapter...
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December 7, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Pensfan.....once again a truly hot H/N fic. I hope this one is longer than the last one. It was so good but too short. I was left wanting more more more. LOL Can't wait to read what's in store for H/N in this story. *patiently waits for new chappie*
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December 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
God, it was good to see another story from you. I ADOARE the way you write sex. Can't fault it. Want more. Lots more.
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November 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
HOT HOT HOT!!! You always blow my mind!! I love Hayden and Natalie together and you make them incredible.
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November 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
JEE UR the best!! it's been a month since the last one.. and of course ur work is again marvellous.. But plz update sooner.. im dying to read your work pensfan100