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for Slow Poison

by hyde

person Malicious Lo
schedule February 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story. I think you wrote it very well. Especially when describing Masa. I really enjoy the way you do it. In fact, I'm a bit inspired. Please continue...


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person Kaori
schedule February 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Two problems lol infact non of them are actually about your plot... it's just I dont get the gacktu.. typo? and Masa was a Gacktjob Guitarist.. Ren plays bass
person Glay
schedule February 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
We want more! We want more! ;D
person Sanna
schedule January 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I really like this. I hope you continue this soon. I wanna know what is going to happen...;)
person Bunnicle
schedule January 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
sooooo... where's the next chapter?
person katie
schedule December 31, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I didn't think it was crap. I thought it was cute. I can't wait to read chapter 2. :P