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please update soon i love this story its so cute and awesome

yay, it's me again... i've been just reading the whole story again, and i still love it the same! :) hehe, hope you'll write something new. take care :)

oh no!!! i've just noticed your comment in chap 9 - there will be more?! more?! yes, yes, YES! :D write something new about them, i love loooong stories ;) *goes to read the whole thing again and again*


*and again*

(cause now, when that hilary-duff-thing is happening, Benj is my last hope... or something :D)
(not that i hate her. it's just i've never thought Joel will be with her. something's not right for me.)

ahhhhhh i love it! update soon por favor

OH my you HAVE to finish this soon! what does benji think? is he gonna be mad at skye for not tellin him? OH please continue soon! i need to know what happens!

Siya

Hello, i really enjoyed your story. i like where this is going and such, i like your style. however she is only 2 months pregnant and showing? this is a major fault in the storyline. when pregnant you don't actually show until at least 4 months of pregnancy, some women can't even tell they are pregnant positivley until the 2nd month of pregnancy. but otherwise it's really good. maybe, just as a suggestion you should change the month of pregnancy she is in, otherwise it sounds really out of whack. Sorry for intruding on this but i just found it out of sequence. keep up the goodwork.

Oh I know it was typical but I couldnt think of anything. :(

oh come on you could do better than that. its just so convientent that he falls asleep when she tells him...how typical and redundant. just tell him for christ sake woman!! its just plain annoying

great chapter, very well written. But one thing , the girl is Hilary Duff? I don't dislike the choice but ...i just don't see her with him
anyway...GOOD JOB!

oh please write more....i'm dying to see if benji and that chick get married...if not benji better take good care of that baby and of skye