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October 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Ah, wasn't that the sweetest?
:-)
Yes, certainly had a good laugh at the end !
Cool !
:-)
Yes, certainly had a good laugh at the end !
Cool !
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February 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
o_O
BARF
BARF
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February 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was so very very wrong!
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February 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
hehehehehehehehehehehehe I have no idea what possessed you to write this... but it's funny
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January 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Not bad. You can write, but I think with some practice (and a good beta reader) you could be even better. Your story seem to lack in the development of characters and plot. Even ficlets should have strong character representation which is something you fall short in. Still, there weren't any major errors that I can see. Like I said, with more practice, your writing will mature. I look forward to seeing you inprove.
Cheers.
Cheers.
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January 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
ewww ewww ewww ewww ewww ewww ewww ewww ewww ewww ewww
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January 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Heh! Thanks doll, always the reaction I'm looking for ;p
- Jeff
- Jeff
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January 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
oohhh...you sick fucker. I loved that fic the first time I read it and I still love it now. cheers luv